omg people shut the fuck up.

fighting on the internet can't be ur option for amusement today. derek. post ur fucking verse and go get ur education seeing that ur in school.

2v. sign me up for ur freaking league

and everyone else.....hooray.

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Im only fighting back tears cuz how funny this topic is

I'm pretty fucking sure Forums > Chat Rooms buddy.

maybe Ricky shoulda taught you to shut your fucking trap before walking onto a site bragging about your rap skills. I'll destroy you son.

You just haven't a fucking clue.

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And, I'll argue all I want with this little shithead mystic, like you said, it's not your business. He brought shit to me without even asking who I was or what I did.

Just because I use bigger words than his big man keith murray.

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well get over it and stop getting internet mad. u can bicker back and forth but arguing online=retarded.

so just sign me up for ur league please.

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I'm not internet mad I'm about to go beat the shit out of your mom.

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call me the lyrical mineral,
i got the most style and plenty of potential,
my lyrics combined with this game r a needed essential,
u cant take my words cuz ur the lowest of the minimal,
my behavior is the worst of the cynical,
u can try stealin these lines,
i got many more but keep them confidential,
they r so powerful they can start an influential rap attack,
a presidential impeachment and vote for the Big D or Ric B,
we the smartest and illest, our style is the chillest,
u can try to beat it but u'll never fulfill this,
we're unique like an abstract artist,
u can never step into our scene,
try ur hardest but u'll never get close,
it'll all be a dream and invisible like a ghost,
we the hardest ever and we bringin it down together,
lyrical master minds from january to december,
my lyrics r so accurate like a bulls eye with a dart,
the doctors and masters of the hip-hop art,
me and Ric B r the owners, ya better check billboards top 100 soon,
cuz we gonne be on top of the charts.




good?

I'll break down your verse.
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call me the lyrical mineral,
i got the most style and plenty of potential,

wtf is a lyrical mineral? What is the virtue of a mineral being lyrical? Why would you be called a lyrical mineral? Mineral and potential barely even rhyme.

my lyrics combined with this game r a needed essential,
u cant take my words cuz ur the lowest of the minimal,

Not only does that not make sense, it implies that you are essential to rap, when obviously it has been around for years before you started doing it.

my behavior is the worst of the cynical,
u can try stealin these lines,
i got many more but keep them confidential,
they r so powerful they can start an influential rap attack,

-_-

a presidential impeachment and vote for the Big D or Ric B,
we the smartest and illest, our style is the chillest,
u can try to beat it but u'll never fulfill this,

...

we're unique like an abstract artist,
u can never step into our scene,
try ur hardest but u'll never get close,
it'll all be a dream and invisible like a ghost,

.......

we the hardest ever and we bringin it down together,
lyrical master minds from january to december,

I guess that makes sense..

my lyrics r so accurate like a bulls eye with a dart,
the doctors and masters of the hip-hop art,
me and Ric B r the owners, ya better check billboards top 100 soon,
cuz we gonne be on top of the charts.

I doubt that even had a flow.




good?

No! So stop acting like you're the most amazing thing in the world and start working on your rapping. You can pop off bullshit about how you're making a rap group and your going to change the world and you can smoke anybody in a battle since you've improved a lot, but that shit doesn't mean a single thing. It doesn't change the fact that you can't even rap decently yet. Less talking, more practicing.

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i decided to start on a new song called "top of the charts"

thats only the first. we still needa come up with hooks and 2 more verses

Someone find me the nearest online sentence generator and watch me outshine this kid

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u need an online sentence generator. lmao cheesy

oooohhh...i didn't read that except part....i apologize...

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Hop off kid you're not sick, fuckin' with thugs'll leave you eatin' bombs whore,
I walk off a cliff and into a pit that was dug to china during the vietnam war.

^ doper than your whole verse.

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that makes no sense lol... is that supposed to be emo bcuz ur talkin about killin urself by walkkin off a cliff.... pathetic. that little line u had sucked so bad hahahahahahaa dude just quit now