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Old 05-23-03, 07:11 PM   #31
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I never post on the poety i just read them, but i mean this one took me away, i sat for 20 minutes after reading it just imagining you writing it, it had so much feeling to it, it wasnt just writing, that doesnt justify it, it was like alive, it took me away and nothing me or anyone could say or write could do justice to this piece... keep up the good work, ill definetely be reading up on more of your poety.
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Old 05-23-03, 07:42 PM   #32
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Damn, your poem got more replies than mine even got looks..hehe. My first drop dropped straight to the bottom :P

Fo' Real, here's a link with another one of her pieces on it. Since you liked this one, like everyone else in this forum, you'll love this one.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=44227
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Old 05-23-03, 07:53 PM   #33
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hm checked it up dat is......... "woah" i believe the word was i said after readin it! no wonder tis in legends.......
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Old 05-25-03, 11:49 PM   #34
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awww. Thanks yall.
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Old 05-27-03, 06:52 AM   #35
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well like your pieces back in the day when i was on this site a few years ago your shit is remarkable,i love your style on this piece inparticular.your words twist together and blend so perfectly,well keep postin these ill ass pieces.peace out boo.
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Old 05-28-03, 08:58 PM   #36
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This is extraordinary! I don't think i've seen one piece get so many peeps on here (at least not for a long long time)...

Has to be in the legends section.

It's has such an esoteric 'beauty' to it (through my 'eyes' anyway..)...
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Old 05-29-03, 12:10 PM   #37
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to where you always come ill mommie always have'nt seen nuthing from ya I did'nt like nuthin at all
I really cant say much else I mean everybody been showin ya love so it look like they took most of what I was go speak on but uh just wanted you to know I acknowledged it holler atcha gul
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Old 05-30-03, 04:55 PM   #38
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Old 05-31-03, 08:22 AM   #39
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Thats The Best ive Seen All Day....More Like A Rap, But Could Be Considered Poetry...Good Job
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Old 06-01-03, 11:31 PM   #40
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thnx player
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Old 06-10-03, 11:00 PM   #41
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Is this you posting your piece on other sites?

Sorry laddeh, cannae poost other saat links...forum roooles..

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Old 06-11-03, 09:29 AM   #42
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No posting of other sites links.

But i'll leave it on here so Gege can tell us if it's her, or whether someone has 'bitten' her work on that site. In which case, she can get in contact with the admin on that site.
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Old 06-11-03, 04:10 PM   #43
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NO THAT IS NOT ME!! and that fuckin makes me wanna not post shit on the internet anymore!! fuckin herb!! thank you so much legendary for showing this to me. I will definately get to the bottom of it..UGH!!
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Old 06-11-03, 04:27 PM   #44
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That dumbass guy didnt even have the sense to change the HIS'S to HERS..After the poetry tourny I dont think I'll post up anymore..unless its copywrited!!
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Old 06-11-03, 04:58 PM   #45
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True Colors

Where the bluest of ocean meets pink skies on the horizon.
Rainbow Raindrops capsizing; The morning sun rising.
These interaction of hues, are of satisfaction to you?
You say yes, But I know your attraction's untrue.
The mixed green and light blue, of a mornings fresh dew.
The black night changing to, the white moonlight's debut.
Through and through; I cant see how one could draw this view:
That when its nature, its beauty. But when its skin, it's taboo.

All too true. We're Like a 'facial-formation', to be honest,
Our interracial-relation causes people to 'frown' on-us.
Cuz they keep bigoted minds shut-tight like an eye-lid
And fidget with the twines of anything hy-brid.
For they love the blossom of deep purple, and would never wish to fade-it.
But forget it was blue and red petals that came together to create-it.
May not fit-in ur-group if one's peach and another's brown
But we stick-to-our-'roots', since we 'hold eachother down'.
Feelings deep, you can't dodge it; you just can't dislodge it
Why must ours be a battle between love and logic?
Love says: "Ive been there since the first time you kissed-him"
Logic says: "You cant marry a muslim and a Christ-ian."
But forget-them, and fuck that whole world they exist-in,
For if we were resisting, look what we'd be missing.
Tho he has different hues in the hint of his face,
I wouldnt fix them to match; not a tint nor a trace.
Even tho if they did, we would be more accepted
But why wish change on somethin already perfected.
I see his true colors, and there's nothing Id trade
For together, we make the most beautiful shade.

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