I'm giving this one to Black... Truest, your verse was nice but you tried too hard... wayyy too hard to do metaphors and punchlines...
when you have to explain your meta's & punches like this:

you're trying to hard...

I see some potential in you truest... keep battling and writting..

Can Both Of you drop a vote in my battle with BigNick... thanks

here's the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47553

uppin for votes yall one more to close............................................. ......... ill return da favour

still uppin ya'll............................................. .............. ill return favour if yo vote up....

uppin for another vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................

vote blak i felt that this was not the best battle ive seen but it had alotta flow at some points that i could get to feel and thats what made me keep readin

but black came straight to the point good flow and had some decent punchs

so vote black