For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor


im out
-slim lanky-

If you wanna be better you've gotta admit to suckin/
Wasn't it dashowstoppa2 that i walked in on you fuckin???/

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wtf kind of battle was this? i'm sorry but i don't get any of this shit...............do y'all even know what a battle is?

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I agree
what the hell you guys smokin

CAT NIP or sumthin

Re do this with all ya stuff together so its not fucking retarded to read

Otay this is how is it...We did 10 lines back and forth.....And now you vote on who's you thought was better.........

seriously^^^ from what i read i don't even remember who wrote what so just put your shit together and then i'll vote................damn

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Respect is all I'm after.
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AGREEd

I thought fuckin bert and ernie were battling

HA HA HA

But serious post this again with ya verses in order
and I WILL VOTE

lmao^^^ Bert and Ernie.............they could get away wit those names don't ya think?

naw but seriously i'll vote when it's set up right

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Slim_lanky:Carmine you don’t even belong on this site /
Your job is not rap it is cooking me dinner every night/
Carmineon't gotta step-to the-mic,It comes-straight-ta-me/
I got telekinesis,Like-tha-gurl-from carrie/
Slim_lanky:Suck my dick bitch, that is humor! A girl tryin to spit/
Spread your lips bitch and ill show you my banana split/
Carmine:Oh god that's funny,but only thing that splits/
It's your mamma's legs while her son's rubbin her tits/
Slim_lanky:So you bring my momma in to this, that aint the right scene/
At least she not the hoe, dropped out of school and having a kid at 14,/
Carmine:I love how* you try so hard to defeat me/
But u couldn't win this battle even if u beat me/(physically)
Slim_lanky:Why do you even try against me you cant hold a fight
First, get a face lift then do some exercise get rid of that cellulite
Carmine:You're fatter than me,would you like some proof??/
If i punched you in the head,your ass would hit the roof/
Slim_lanky:For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor
Carmine:If you wanna be better you've gotta admit to suckin/
Wasn't it dashowstoppa2 that i walked in on you fuckin???/


There vote on it now....

well i think carmine won after i read all this and props to carmine for fixing hers

Not bad Girly Gurl
Holla

Carmine you don’t even belong on this site /
Your job is not rap it is cooking me dinner every night//
Suck my dick bitch, that is humor! A girl tryin to spit/
Spread your lips bitch and ill show you my banana split//
So you bring my momma in to this, that aint the right scene/
At least she not the hoe, dropped out of school and having a kid at 14,//
Why do you even try against me you cant hold a fight/
First, get a face lift then do some exercise get rid of that cellulite//
For my final two lines Ill teach you a lesson, you whore/
Clean up that cum stain and pick that magnum off your floor//


-slim lanky-

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