aight. White virus. Your Ryme scheme was Ok. It sounded
pretty simple, but thats ok if your Punches hit Right. You started
off good with your first few lines, then i saw a few Fillers in the middle that werent strong at all in my opinion. Over-all
your verse wasn't bad, but it could have been worded alot Better.
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Knox. your punches were better. ryme scheme was better
with multies as well. Some of your lines coul;d have used a little bit more work for flow but over-all NIce drop.

vote-Knox..
Sorry i cant POLL VOTE, but i aint a NEWB..


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virus's verse wasnt too great, pretty bit basic, had some attempts at wordplay nothing great though, flow was good. you should up your vocab and work on some multies
knox was ok. more complex, better vocab, a few weak multies, no drastic punches or wordplay

Punches: tie
Wordplay: tie
vocab: knox
multies: knox... but even his were barley there
flow: virus


vote= knox

Haha thanx for tha vote.....................

Last one its 4-3 my lead who gonna do tha last vote?

my vote goes to white-virus,i think he came harder and had better punches,jus my opinion.

my vote:White-virus

I write with agression, and i fight with expression,
All the hype that i'm stressins, like the nicest of lessons
Like a knife when it's left in, you'll get sliced to perfection
I'm the type to keep it tight, Cause my life is a blessin

^ fuckin freeposter...................................

SHOULD BE BANNED............................................ ....

Last up....

4-4

lets get this battle over wit................
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