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Old 10-29-03, 06:12 PM   #1
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aigh't was an ok drop. like Masta C said try to cut down on the length of your lines a bit but it was ok got a good rhyme scheme and some ok multi's but try to play on ur words a bit to (wordplay) but I say u's in. and also ausrotten drop a verse in here or hook us up with a link to one of ur open mics or battles.
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Old 10-29-03, 06:30 PM   #2
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i didnt like it.....
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Old 10-29-03, 06:51 PM   #3
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Carson, told me to check in over here, so check and here is a link thing.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88069
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Old 10-29-03, 07:09 PM   #4
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aight, ill go talk wit masta, get back to ya soon
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Old 10-29-03, 07:21 PM   #5
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been talkin and decided that you are welcome to join up, i'll get ya name put on the roster, aight man................
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Old 10-29-03, 07:33 PM   #6
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what about me
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Old 10-29-03, 07:41 PM   #7
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aight young i havn't forgot about ya, i think you need to build up your posts abit, and try again............no newbs allowed, sorry dawg......
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Old 10-29-03, 07:45 PM   #8
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wow this crew is ILLLLLLL hear someone knocking??? then let me in
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Old 10-29-03, 07:51 PM   #9
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^^com enter at free will...ur ill as shit.....welcome..if ur down pm me....pc*1*
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Old 10-29-03, 08:12 PM   #10
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yo COM, ya know ya welcome any time dawg............
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Old 10-29-03, 08:14 PM   #11
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Well, since you guys said I am in, then I want to be IN

Could someone tell me how to center stuff in your sig? Also I have a banner link that I can't get to show up, could someone help me with that, the link is aleady in my sig.
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Old 10-29-03, 08:32 PM   #12
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COM is welcome for sure if he wants to be in, and Vin i PM'd you so check that out then, and Keep The Try outs coming in.
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Old 10-29-03, 11:31 PM   #13
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ya com u weclome anytime dawg. fo sho u'd be a definite help to this crew seein as we juss tryin ta start out. peace.
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Old 10-30-03, 12:37 AM   #14
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If Masta C battles me... I'll try out for this crew

nevermind...your whole crew vs me and my hardcore team...
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Old 10-30-03, 06:55 AM   #15
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why you comin in here, saying you'll join if masta battles ya, as if hes got to cos we NEED you in the crew, ya full of ya self a bit aint ya, then you have the nerve to challenge the whole crew, i think you need to join the real world again, take a break from ya computer, oh and stop free post in the thread.......there'll be plenty of challenging later on, just WAIT........aight
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