aight battle....

legit votes speaks:
soul:~:
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personlas:6
punches:7
structure:6
creativity:5
vocab:6
thoughts: yor verse was not bad, had some good punches here and there, but i wusnt consistant with them, you needa have a nice flow... hittin puches ery line, more creativity... personals- some came but most lacked, aight verse = 30/50

killa:~:
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personals:7
punches:8
structure:6
creativity:6
vocab:6
thoughts: pretty good punches, you came consistant with them, they kept hitten for tha majority. i liked yor creativity just a lil more, you had a bit more similies and it wus a nice verse, pretty good verse = 33/50

vote: killa, consitant punches and more creativity...33/50
vote/ killah bwoy

return tha favor...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128836

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killah bwoy:

Only Time Your "raps are gifted" Is when christmas comes around-
Thinkin You King..Lookin' like an Old Bitch rockin' a burger king crown-
^^lol funny opener but not too good of a punch 6/10
perked up lookin all gangsta but he really a punk..looks are deceiving-
Tryin to catch a football..Losses are the only thing you "receiving"-
^^played concept but still decent 5/10
battlin me was the biggest mistake since enygma let you in sindicate-
the M-stands for Masterbation,standin there with a bottle of lubricant-
^^lmao funny shyt nice punch/personal 8/10
You A bitch I'll Merk Y.....Fuck It ill let my rhymes finish the sentence-
this rap game you cant get in like a recording studio with no entrance-
^^concept played again in 1st line but still hott 7/10
get hit in the dome Only thing u invented was a maxy pad for your head-
My raps are poisonous shove my pencil in ur arm..ill from the lead-
^^decent closer nice punch 6/10

overall : 32/50 (64%)

M-section..soul skripts..resolve..what other name am i forgetting...?

think your good ? , shiit , open you’re eyes you damn freak.
I`m spitting bars & when I drop
……………………………. He’ll vanish like hide & seek
^^played concept(hide and seek line) decent opener 6/10
I’ve defined ya weak, & you’re pussy - yea so violence’s dope.
Skilled – nah , you’re punches lose taste . . like it's diet coke.
^^lol funny bar nice shyt 7/10
Ya got no respect , you know , your played & always corney
N’ You’re always battling here.
……………………cos you`ve been slaughted outta of tourney
^^good personal and punch 7/10
ya get dg`d if ya fuck wid me, I aint playing no crazy games
kid you should not cheat and stop feeding for days – like david blaine
^^seen stuff similar to david blaine line weak closer 3/10

overall : 23/40 (58%)

vote: killah...overall he had the better verse i think cuz his was more funnier...like a comedy piece good verses from both tho

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man why is the score like it is....killa bwoiy killed this....this shapshifter...(name) yo dude why is ur name always changing...anyways i think that killa bwoy took this because of his metas and punches...but then again this is my opinion...

v/ killa bwoy

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