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10-05-04, 02:23 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: mic-wrecker
3rd Shift: k 3rd shift had better stucture n he had a aight vocab could been better but iunno he was jsut better with punches to i felt his verse better alot he had some attepts to wordplay also his verse coulda been better...6/10 ruffiadah: k that was weak man no punches but attempts lol and wack wordplay and stucutre was off by far lol you need some vocab also man i wasent feelin yours at all could of been way better lol...3/10 elavate VOTE: 3rd shift return the favour in any of my battles links in the sig |
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10-06-04, 11:15 AM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
does anybody vote anymore look at the date this was made!!!!! come on man uppin
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10-06-04, 03:06 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: ABC3 055A
Voted For: mic-wrecker
damn mic u ripped this kid................... ruffridah.........man u came weak son. u need to hella elevate playa. ure flow was aight, as was structure. punches and personals were there but they were weak man. that shit about wreckin the mic been done so many times before. the american idol line was gay, cuz american idol was pop music, nuthin to do wit rap, so ure punch is fucked up there. u rhymin basic, need to get more complex shit, work on ure wordplay, get more creative and shit. overall 5/10..weak!! mic-wrecker......as i expected u killed this kid. no need to really drop that much hott shit though. ure flow was tight, need to still wrok on structuring ure lines so they all near enough the same length. [unches and personals were gud, some hard, some average, nuthin too weak. u didnt rhyme too basic, some complex shit in there, wordplay was pretty gud. need to get more creative though, use links and shit, or quotes, make ure verse stand out. overall 7/10.....gud stuff. return the fave on my battles in my siggy.
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10-06-04, 03:09 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP: D2B8 EE3F
uppin for the last mutha fuckin vote to KO this nigga
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10-06-04, 03:55 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: B5DE 0A1C
Voted For: mic-wrecker
This battle was sorry to say, Hands down. Creativity - 3rd Shift Punchlines - 3rd Shift Structure - Tied Word Play - 3rd Shift Sentence flow - 3rd Shift Complexity - 3rd Shift Conclusion: Ruff Ridah, just keep on battling more, and you will elevate. It showed in this battle your status in the "battling arena". You simply need to elevate more, and that will come wit practice. 3rd Shift, not your best, but it was enough. You were tight at the beginning, but it seemed that you was searching for punchlines at certain spots. But it was enough. Vote - 3rd Shift Good battle Overall
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