Voted For: anxiety

this was a dope battle....

Socrates....i was most definitely feeling your verse, you flowed well and stayed consistent to the topic. the story you told is a real life situation that many people suffer with so its easy to understand....u got your point across and delivered a nice picture of the whole struggle to be a couple aspect, and then the whole struggle to stay a couple and how it all fell apart, so in actual fact you addressed the topic in multiple ways through telling a single story. your vocabs weren't that complex really, kind of basic so that could be improved upon, i feel ure biggest plus was the emotion in ure piece and the ending to it was real nice. OVERALL: 7.5/10

Anxiety......very nice piece, an interesting approach to the topic and not something i wud've expected. you did flow very well and stayed consistent to the topic also. the real thing i like about your piece is that the whole concept speaks to everyone really on RV so everyone can really relate to the verse through personal experience. u didnt go for the story aspect and went with a more definition kind of approach, defining the topic through what people must do to achieve respect. ure vocabs weren't all super complex but they had the edge in this battle, and i think that ure verse had a lot of meaning to which was a good thing, OVERALL: 8/10


overall i give the battle to anxiety, because whilst both pieces had their own good aspects and were pretty much matched toe to toe with quality, i can relate more to anxiety's piece from personal experience of my own so therefore i enjoyed the piece that little bit more.

V/ - anxiety


plz rtf in my young blaze battle, links in the siggy werd

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