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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

word, not much to explain, i vote honestly, kin got this for sure

my only suggestions kin....your structure is kinda funny, but you do use multies, but still could use some tweaks think, but you seem to know what you are doing...so keep up

big city, meh, nothing special, poor structure....nothing special, seen better, no time to drop more of a vote, so yeah

v/kinethic

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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

Big City:

He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
^^good multies and meta but stretched 6/10
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
^^dope bar 9/10
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
^^good meta and personal 8/10
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
^^good bar 6/10
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
^^woo fire 10/10
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
^^good meta but stretched 6/10

Overall: 45/60 (75%)

Kinethic:

Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
^^dope bar nice multies and metas 14/20
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
^^wooo fire again 18/20
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!!
^^dope bar again 8/10
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!!
^^nice shit 8/10

Overall: 48/60 (80%)

Dope fucking battle probably the best i have seen in FL since i was battling here

Vote: Kinethic

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Voted For: Kin*Ethicâ„¢

Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
Lol. Nice nameplay. Creative concept.
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
Lmao. Nice ass nameplay again.
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!! (ROFL!)
Lol. Nice nameplay.
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!! (KO!)
Wow... That's just Illy. Dope ass concept.

He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
Ok Ok... First part is blah... Second is cool.
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
Lol. Decent.
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
Ok. This is straight. Ok personal.
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
Played concept playa.
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
Umm... Ok? This is ok. A lot of assumption though.
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
Lol. This was prolly ya dopest bar.

Punches - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - His nameplays killed it, while Big City didn't have many.
Personals - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - Nameplays.
Wordplay - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - The Cit/Sit wordplay won it for him.
Creativity - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - His first and last bar were pretty creative while City had a sonnin' you line. Lol.
Complexity - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - His nameplay punchlines got him this.
Multies - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - Obviously.
Structure - Big City - Obviously.

Vote - Kin*Ethicâ„¢ - He came harder with punchlines and made it more personal with all his nameplays.

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