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06-17-05, 08:12 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 1EAF 3328
Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente
Drakel[b]: beautiful and touching piece right here, may not have been the most original one but the emotion simply poured out. You kept the vocab rather simple but that gave it a serene vibe. Imagery was there but not that much, it's more an emotional piece. I was feeling the flow, had some multis and similar sound expressions which improved it. [b]Tweety: wonderful piece in my opinion, the emotion was so strong and pure, it poured out of every line. Like how your story developed, especially the last part was good storywise. You managed to combine both imagery and emotion, flow was off here and there but overall it was okay. Vocab was nice Vote goes to Tweety because of the stronger combination of imagery and emotion, no hate though Drakel
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06-17-05, 08:18 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 8845 5B74
Thanx hun uppin this...............................
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06-17-05, 04:01 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 6A42 C334
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-21-05, 07:49 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
bump..............................................
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06-26-05, 01:02 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: C834 F7E1
Bumpity Bump Bump.........................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-26-05, 01:37 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
how gay is that -_-............................................
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06-28-05, 11:39 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 4DC7 DE51
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-02-05, 04:12 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
bump.............................................. ..............
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07-04-05, 12:37 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: CD04 7963
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-06-05, 03:10 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-09-05, 12:46 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: A4E3 3F71
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-09-05, 11:36 AM
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Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 363C E843
Someone vote............................................
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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07-10-05, 02:40 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D44E DE4F
Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente
Drakel: Your Verse Had Some Originality In That Topical Piece. I Was Feeling The Direction You Took and How In Your Lines You Had Inner-Concepts Connecting Together. Was Pretty Decent. Your Structure Was Nice and Your Emotion Was Good. Overall Pretty Decent Drop. Tweety: Your First Paragraph of Scripture Was Medicore...Your Emotion Wasn't Really Pushed Through Too Much, but I Felt Your Direction and Delivery of This Piece Was Hot. As Your Second Paragraph Kicked In, It Started Grabbing My Attention More and Had Me Wanting To Read The Rest. Your Emotion Starting Coming Forth and I Just Felt This Was The Highlight of Your Piece. Vote - Tweety...I Felt Your Piece More Than Drakels, It Just Stuck Out To Me More and I Related To It More. ~R~ |
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07-10-05, 02:43 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
^ you vote against me in everything....starting to get annoying dude
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07-10-05, 03:29 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D44E DE4F
^I Voted Honestly..
But You Vote Against Me In Everything As Well....Guess We Just Don't Like Each Others Styles :-/ ~R~ |
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