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08-27-05, 02:16 PM
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Upping this again..
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08-28-05, 01:31 AM
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Vote, vote, vote.
You lazy fuckers.. shiiiittttttttt. |
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08-28-05, 04:43 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: A490 C9BD
upping fuckers........................................... .............
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08-28-05, 06:49 AM
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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
IP: 68F3 D87D
checkin pollz......................................
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08-28-05, 10:03 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A0F2 0238
Voted For: Mimesis
mim-some nice stuff, very consistent in the beginning n what not, closer was funny, basically you commanded this battle throughout.imo i think your lines could be shourtened a touch thats about the only improvement i could say your style/verse needs.... good shit overall.... . unf-im a fan of multi's, but your verse wasnt close to using them effectively, alot of filler that hurt your verse....cuz your setups were basically identical to your punches... with that said, i saw no creativity or decent wordplay throughout.. you were out leveled here yo...pz . . vote/mim, way more consistent with punches throughout the battle
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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08-28-05, 02:03 PM
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IP: 2311 4CAC
Thanks for the vote and shit.
Upping this.. nah mean? |
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08-28-05, 06:41 PM
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IP: 2311 4CAC
Upping this again.
Keep voting you gay weiners. |
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08-31-05, 01:03 PM
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IP: A713 E6BC
Upping this..
Just somebody fucking vote. Close this shit out. |
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08-31-05, 04:59 PM
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Upping this face heads.
VOTE, VOTE, VOTE. And read the quote in my sig.. ITS ILL. |
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08-31-05, 11:47 PM
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Upping this.
Keep voting fish nips and stuff... |
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09-01-05, 07:17 AM
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Nt Your Average
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppp...................... ............
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09-01-05, 06:06 PM
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IP: 2311 4CAC
Upping this.
Keep voting fish nips and stuff... |
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09-01-05, 09:15 PM
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Upping this.
Keep voting fish nips and stuff... |
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09-01-05, 10:17 PM
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IP: 963B DD50
Voted For: Mimesis
Mimesis had this from the time this battle was set up.. UNF.. i know ur intelligent.. although u get DR's... i think u could be decent on this site... but dude Multi's dont win battles. u had one decent punch.. and it still didnt match mim's worst.. Mim your verse was solid i know u didnt spit ur hardest.. but u really didnt need to.. your flow was on point.. your personals were alrite... your punches was good... i didnt like ur closer.. thats borderline getting played but it was still iight.. i liked your opener.. and the notebook line.. i felt those ones.. they were hitting pretty hard.. soo its clear Mim won this battle... no hate to UNF.. just start using more concept/witty/wordplay in ur lines.. Multi's are nice.. but not in text... they can be used good.. but if used with a punchline.. i'd say if u like using multi's soo much read some of O.M.B's texts battles.. he's not the greatest.. but he knows how to connect multi's with punches.. i think u could eventually get to that point.. u just have to hit text puberty.. and u'll be iight.. soo mim wins on punches personals structure and flow.. no hate.. pz
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