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Old 01-03-07, 10:59 PM   #31
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i've mastered the art of this, and am carving him
kid put comics in his avator to hope we'd Marvel him
you only post in the cypher, you aren't kidding me
you're just too damn wack for DaTrus to let in the league
Crime's location fools no one, i can see dude is lying
but now i'll make it a point to beat you through time
kid, ya'll harm me? i bring guns, bombs & shit when charging
you already got an army? Nah, you just wish you are-me
i got a shotty & whenever i pump, i be knockin ya blood out
& docs will put a pump to your stomach just to get the slugs out


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Old 01-04-07, 06:33 AM   #32
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dudes I seen in the cypher so far, and last weeks champ, and all of you

Mr Benjamin
Blackstar
Famous quotes
Comedian
Apex
Raised
Crime
King solo


this fag is gay because you like to fuck and Benjamen backwards
ya poor know shit is played… as motivation for the other wack actors

as for this Black kid yer your hung the way saddam get in court
cos my weapon of mass destruction… makes your adams contort

and heres a Famous quote, you’re all a bunch of fucking Comedians
cos ya bitches call you jokes… the way your sex is demeaning men

yall hit the ceiling when I stated Apex came on top of his game
And no I aint talking about his skill, I mean the picture he framed

yall want beef let it rain , umbrellas keep me outta your range
The way your down pour is engaged with all your family names

and fuck you all I know Crime pays because im rollin with cronik
but I still power punch his ass, and ask him… what you got on it

because the King is just Solo… but that’s just the state of his worth
kid could stick his dick in the earth and the bitch still coudnt do dirt

rip experience to pieces CSI sweep the evidence ,of set presidents
RV elite you pussys irrelevant
……………cos I veto Bush and fuck U.N some anal experiments

^^that’s metaphoric kids no homo shit, don’t get excited now Benjamin
cos my punches will leave you Rai$ed ...more than Olympian javelins

Fame, Comedian making me sick twenty lines no extensions
back’n fourth like sea sections
...............someone get me my knife, to cut their sexual tension


twenty!

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Old 01-04-07, 12:42 PM   #33
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who the fuck is this faggot... comin crooked at me...//
illl leave greviss family greavin... just for fuckin wit C...//
to the R.. to the I.M.E...//
im a call u carlos mencia cuz your the number 1 DEE DEE DEE...//
(lmfao)
i mean serius his raps are worse than faime s quotez...//
goign at everyone in the cypher... thinking he spiottin famous quotes...//
give em a mic.. i bet this lame just choke...//
like the whole worcestor centrum... going up in smoke...//
all u doing is blowing steam so stop kneeling in hot water...//
the young emporer strikes back...GREVISS I AM YOUR FATHER...//
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Old 01-04-07, 06:08 PM   #34
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Honestly, I'm starting to believe in Santa, it's amazing me duke
cause I wished for a wack no-name to diss me...
and you made it come true!
I can't count the quotes in your verse cause ya spitting none, son
you said I drop the worse raps... but aren't you forgetting someone?
Everytime you drop, I look for quotes or hope they'll be done
and well, other than my name in ya verse... I don't see none
Chicks make you think you'll get home and they'll freak some
but instead, you get 'played over and over again' like reruns
And I play like you can really beat me, til I send a diss to you
so when I drop, I just be 'playin you' like the chicks do you
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Old 01-04-07, 10:27 PM   #35
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^this cats a riot maybe he should be comedian...//
cuz it dont matter who... cuz after we battle...//
its hurting u when breathing in....//
u dont wanna play quotez... said hed let me think winnin...//
but the real deal is im letting u think that i think that im winning...//
but in all actuality im the real one sinning...//
it aint bout the father son or the holy spirit...//
its about the slaughter the gun an whoever fears it...//
im to hot for u to come within 20 feet...//
cuz when i spit everyone around gets burned 3rd degree...//
i smoke gotti's like i smoke clowns... all damn day...//
an my feinds come like clockwork all damn day...//
actin like white apart of his complexion...//
dont be a menace type of feind...//
sucking dick for directions...//
dont try to battle those u cannot beat...//
pick ya battles wisley.. or youll always see defeat...//
i thought u had skill.. but i guess i was wrong...//
hang up ya mic now dude.. your as good as gone...//
an yeah i spit cypher i dont care bout the leauge...//
i dont care if im the top rapper in the whole RV..//
i dont care if im king or even faime s...//
cuz im criminal so i choose to be nameless...//
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Old 01-05-07, 12:15 AM   #36
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i saw your last line, making the lying posts stop, B
there's a difference between being nameless and a nobody
don't try and copy my style, this weirdo is torn
and it's only fitting when i'm on the computer Nero will burn
you're a pussy, a fake... and don't ever doubt it
Crime is scared of the "boos" that the fucking crowd gives



*goes to finish verse for Wordz*
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Old 01-05-07, 12:52 AM   #37
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dude calls himself comedian but i dont see nothin funny
till i pull out the heat and aim @ him and start bustin
till aint nothin left, leave him on the ground in a slump and
walk off wit his bitch, wallet and car, now thats thuggin
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Old 01-05-07, 12:58 AM   #38
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this nerd is whoring his soul and spitting boring
i'll de-liver your death, when i pull out your internal organs
i'm not funny ? ha... you've gotta quit the dumb lies
but i make up for the fact
BY ACTUALLY HAVING PUNCHLINES
my next line - well, you should quote - it's true
the only time you AIM, is getting your friends to vote for you
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Old 01-05-07, 01:12 AM   #39
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you beating me, ha, thas only a question of how
nigga, the only thing u "pulling out" is this dick from your mouth
keep all talkin shit and im gonna have to tighten ur lip bitch
juss like ur girl when she on her kness tryin to get a sip of my dick
dont quit ur day job pussy, fucking wit me, i'll pull the "Mac"
holes in ya chest be "Bernie"(burning), from gettin hit wit that
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Old 01-05-07, 01:46 AM   #40
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^ lol, lil wayne groupie..


u MUUUST b gay, rockin that name. you damn lame
riding a dude who's known 4 kissing more babies than bush on a presdential campaign
tryin act all thug, but u can't phase me..
.. i might see G in ur shit. depends on whether i decypher ur matrix avy
i don't wanna seem wanksta. but i really gotta wow him
so. .
i'll fucking leave u in two parts.. like ur idols last two albums


haha
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Old 01-05-07, 02:31 PM   #41
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Dawg is you out my fuckin mine,tryin take my shine,
I fuck yo ass up like I did yo mom from behind,
when I step in I ain't hard to find,
just look for the wit the hardest grind,
you bein the best you realy is a crime,
I would take ya girl if she was realy fine,
but I guess she aint cuz I done seen a dime,
This shit is my mine so dont come @ me wrong,
I would diss you on a track but you ain't worth a song,
Im the X man type I control the storm ,
I can see you new RV, thats why I understand you comin @ me,
I tired of killin you, you niggas funny to me,
while Im rippin ya ass Im makin a beat,
Cuz I got guns like ya dennies they be takin ya teef,
Damn I gotta go ya girl waitin fa me.
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Old 01-05-07, 02:58 PM   #42
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you wanna blow up in the biz? dude just hold up
you can make it big,
when i turn you into a supernova
see? ^ you're dead now, cause i'm better than hoes
you've got an underscore <-- which explains why you never get votes
dudes keep what i write locked in memory, i said it kid
my wordplays with bitches... more than you ever will
no homo, but your sex life? boring, what you got is little
but bitches DO sleep with you... they doze off in the middle
your purse & sweater go to the hearse with chedder
^bitch, it goes to show anyone can put gay words together
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Old 01-05-07, 03:26 PM   #43
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oh shit we got some newcomers to RV...
there funny chumps... maybe they should join comedians army...
there no way black star ever could harm me...
when i spit i dont need a beat but still keep it thumpin...
theres a party in Blacks mouth an everyones cumin...
an shit even comedian runnin off at the lips...
not the ones on his face but the ones between his hips...
an who is this clown calin him self te ora...
ill turn cheezy smile upside down... when i tear his aura..
its ova comedian black star an da carter...
ill leave u cold like i threw ya soul in a bucket of ice water...
im nice partner... dont ever question me dude
cuz id leave u lookin like a pack of gum Already been chewed...
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Old 01-05-07, 04:46 PM   #44
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Yo this herb aint a baller , kids never touched the grind
call me a good citizan,becuz I really dont deal wit crime
I do break crime down like the Chief of Police does, wit all da street trends
have this kid seein my bars for days, like he got locked up on the weekend
And dude's girl is a big one , uses an umbrella when he gets brains
becuz when her thunder thighs collide, thats the reason that it rains
For the drugs people act funny , but around me you act all scummy
juss call me Joe Rogan, I got crime eatin slugs for some easy money
Spittin it simple never wins, thats why this dude goin to lose this race
"Easy does it" I say once, when I'm placing ur girl ontop of my face
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Old 01-05-07, 06:08 PM   #45
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I punch like tyson, when I cock back I eat kids like lunch time
But sonnys verse amusing...
.....to display what happends when u forget to add punchlines
dogg, your dead...the cypher is a joke if I dont drop crack
But then I saw crimes verse...Suddenly sonnys doesn't seem THAT wak
Coz these kids are weak in the knees, I'll shatter more than a thought
Coz Id throw Supernova punches...but comedian, that line was wak as fuck!!!
Man, I'll take over the game...murdering simpletons with ease
Then take the rest of the alphabet...to help a black_star learn to read
But back to sonney, Coz this fag prefers to be recieving the spankings
Coz while Im spitting off topic...thats just where we wont see him in the ranking
So kill yourself, thats a special request..please take it to mind
Along with a pipe, a bat or anything else you can find
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