yo 1st dude realli need 2 fix ya flow u just sayin ya words man u had sum good lyrics tho da intro was mean as shit yo i was feelin dat 4real fix ya flow tho cuz on da real if u aint got flow ppl not gonna b interested n da song

2nd dude-ya flow was good lyrics was kool work on ya delivery tho i kno i cant say much but have more emotion n ya voice

but overall it was a ok piece due to da flow of da first cat

intro is coo...

1st verse, yea i'm feelin the flow, voice is coo... lyrical content is coo too... u sound like someone.. not sure who... oh u know i think i heard this shit on Rb maybe.. sound familliar...

hook is coo, he sound like dude rollin wit cin laden.. they did a song called music for te streets hook is almost the same...

2nd verse shit is bout the same calibur... this is one dem get ya thinkin tracks... quality is good, got that crispy mic creations... lol... yea yo, this is a nice track still..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...685#post2162685
^peep that for me

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yea, Cali, you talk a lot of shit, but you improving too, yo. Gotta give you props for that. It wasn't spectacular like someone said, but it wasn't bad either. Pretty nice. I liked Triple's hook. good shit on that. Your verse parts weren't bad either. Flow was off a lil, but your emotion nice. Lyrics coo. good shit, yo. pc one.

RTF on my and Trip's sugar soon pc yo.

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