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Voted For: Big City

wow, this was easy. lyricle disciple came hard, but big city was on a completely different level. i like how both of u used multis even tho whenever I do it people always say it's a prewrite.

big city-alot of originality in your punches, everything hit well, multis were a strong point as always but most of all everything made sense, as well as a strong finisher. and that noxema pad line was killer. 9/10

lyricle disciple-u came hard but none of your lines really made sense to me. structure was a strongpoint of yo urs but it didn't seem to flow well. while on the other hand big city's wasn't structured perfectly but when u read it it flowed real nice. 5/10

winner= big city

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Voted For: Big City

After i kill this dude,... dog, ima make ya leave classs
squeeze fast,n watch this "lil sun/son" pass away like Steve Nash
give u bruises intact, jack, you losin this match
if you a disciple, than you must be the Juda's of rap
thats my candid opinion, slash ya face wit rancid incisions
while you fall on these bars like you landed in prison
City pop u at noon, hop in ya tomb wit rockets to boom
u can be a disciple of lyrics, but this battle im a prophet of doom
i cock neeners, lad, have ya mom's screamin mad
when i let the shank, scrub ya face like a Noxema pad
i know you schemin bad, thats the reason why i slump cats
the pump blasts, burn ya head off like a struck match
i cant decipher ya diction, cuz its compliant with fiction
your on a journey to a loss, and im assigning the mission
sit ya ass down, cuz the ruegers is long
only time somebody told u to "stand up" was a ludacris song...dog its nothin

Yo Diz Verse Wuz Real Nice, Da Punchyez Wuz Everywhere, Da Shit Wuz Flawless, From Da Openin Bar 2 Yo' Very Last, Everythin Was Nice Frum U Man, Flow Wuz On Point, Rhymez Were Basic Yet Highly Effective, Da Best Bar=

i cant decipher ya diction, cuz its compliant with fiction
your on a journey to a loss, and im assigning the mission

Da Wordplay Wuz Hot, Da Vocab Wuz Strong, An Da Punch Wuz Iight, U Killed It Dawg!


As Big As It Is His City Will Still Get Missed Like All Of-His-Votes
Couldn't Smell Defeat With Shoes Of And He He Followed-His-Nose
The Hollow-Is-So-Close,....That It'll Turn Him Into Soll-lid-Toast
This Model-Is-So-Close, Tho Feeling Spot Bottles-To-His-Throat
I'm Adam Your Eve, I Let You Eat First, Then Like Jo Jo Scream
And I'm Not Screaming Anything Bitch It's Get Out And LEAVE!!!!!
Your Chances Of Beating Me Is Like Your Chances, Of Dying Son!
But I'll Let You Get One Dick Riding Vote For Trying............One!!!!

U Had Sum Iight Linez Lyricle, Nuthin Out Of Da Ordinary, Da Punchez Dint Really Hit 4 Me, Nice Ideaz, Juz Not Strong Enuff 2 Get U Da Win, Had A Few Unceccessary Linez Also, Lyke ''The Hollow Is So Close'' Bar, Wuznt Feeling It, Yo Punchez Dint Have Da Rite Wording An Proper Disses Lyke Big City

Vote/ Big City, Overall Da More Enjoyable Read & Punchlinez

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature

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ight will do son, thanks for the honest feedback, uppin for the win

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