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01-08-05, 11:30 AM
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i think dis was a good drop i like da structure yo vocab decent verse
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01-08-05, 01:53 PM
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thanks.....uppin
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01-09-05, 12:40 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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ight.....uppin..
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01-09-05, 11:04 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin..........
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01-11-05, 05:54 PM
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01-16-05, 04:40 PM
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this shit was hot i can relate to how you feel me parents like that dis the was good as a bitch man ill like you structure and the concept of the verse really got me into it i gotta check out more of your stuff
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01-16-05, 05:15 PM
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word thanks....
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01-16-05, 09:25 PM
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Possibly hall of famed
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01-16-05, 09:45 PM
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word.....much appreciated....but shit i have way more better shit den this...
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01-20-05, 05:29 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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uppin...........
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01-20-05, 06:33 PM
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shit was straight, on point, vocab was bout a 7/10. i like the true story aspect i give that a 9/10 so overall i'd have to give you a 8/10 keep shit real
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01-20-05, 09:29 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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word thanks.......uppin
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01-23-05, 05:05 AM
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this definatly has a good flow and carried through-out the verse...vocab was pretty nice and lyrics were also aight overall...but nice shit all around, i was feelin it
keep droppin ~1~
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01-23-05, 05:43 AM
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Man this was garbage. All you did was tell a boring story with a few big words. Flow was offffffffffffff. Emotion wasn't there, you don't use words like "Whack" when you're trying to be real. Did I already say how bad the flow was? Horrible. Dont center your shit cuz it fucks up the reading abilities, I don't care how pretty it looks. You gotta get more fuckin creative and get deeper into the lyrics, cuz this was TRASH.
3/10
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01-23-05, 01:50 PM
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^tru......but this was one of my wack ones..ive started to use metas in my lines more now..and i also rushed this too...but socrates you couldnt do any better
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