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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

K-Trini:

Best verse Ive seen from you, but thats not saying much. You lacked creative punches, dope wordplay, and creative personals. You were not very consistent with punches, which made your verse wack. Decent multies, but that doesnt win battles-punches do, and your verse lacked.

JTR:

Definetly not the best from you, but I understand you didn't really need to try in this battle. You were consistent with personals that were both funny and hit, and they were pretty creative (nothing was played). Both verses flowed fine, so that wasnt an issue for either of you.

Overall, JTR had the better verse, so he gets my vote.

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Breakdown

Trini
Jackie Unceaselly attempt to dodge ,but this time the~loop-hole's-trapped~
Any applause for u comes from illusions,so you tell me~who's-soul-clapped~
Nice Wordplay and Nice Little personal on his crew
Pm'in me and callin me herb ? but your'e the faggot who's sedated
And Over 3000 posts in 3 months? , a nerd's is wat youv'e formated
Bad ryming Not all that Good of a bar or personal or punch sorry
Touchin on urself cause ya had last post in every thread in front page?
Jack the false ripper couldn't rip E-style if he payed under the blunt wage
......Nice :thmbup:..

Overall You Had a 75% Good verse your middle bar wasnt all dat good and it almost made your whole verse look played and wack So watch out fo wack bars man Theyll bring you down

Jack
Middleweight cuz you stay between guys, thats sick
K-Trini(dad)?.. ya, cuz "boxers" always stay on dicks
....Nice concept...
Your wack, ok-trini? And damn, your rhymes aint felt
N' I aint talkin boxin when trini swings bellow the belt
...Same concept as before man Be original ....
This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad
Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad
Your using the same approach all throughout the whole verse man and thats bad you should keep using that same wordplay and same Approach in each bar mayne and thats what made your verse look that much unoriginal You was good with the first punch but then all the rest of your punchez was jus repeating the same concept as your first bar
so sorry i cant guve you my vote in this battle


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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

lmfao hahahahahahaha

you owned him simple and straight through ...

trini- shorten up your lines get a flow... fix your style up take out the ~ things they are noobish the soul clapped thing is played .. but you new sorta so i guess its aight.. but yea alright just didnt have the impact of Jacks haha

jACK hahaha your shit jus had me going dude... like a bitch and a vibrator .... but werd you had good rhyme off and your structure was workin you kept it short and still packed the punch... nothing wrong with your verse...
This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad
Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad

that was the funniest line hahah wow

For having the better verse overall...
Vote//Jack the Ripper

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