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damn last few peeps thanx 4 the response send me links and ill check yours peace
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I liked it it was really long but sumtimes thats wat it takes make sum more like this!
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it was good....
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Yo This Was Tight, Had A Nice Flow, And Good WordPlay, Uppin.....
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Envied Thoughtz Phenom~~SkepTik~~42-Keyz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3203450&posted=1#post3203450
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thanx for the response keep'em comin send me linx 2 comment back peace
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ok....the first verse was ok...had some misspelling with the bigger words though....but flowed smoother and was easier to read than your second and third verses.... the second and third verse u fell off ...it seems like u were just rushing on those verses...u even repeated yourself on one part.....the hooks weren't good they seemed rushed to......no punches or metas in it nothing like that.... after all u saying u the "lyrical hustla" so i expected those....so yeah u should actually slow down and think about what your putting down instead of rushing it.....
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it was nothing rushed but thanx 4 the comment this song old when i get around ill edit it but for now ima keep droppin shit thanx 4 feed peace
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well if it wasn't rushed.....then u need to work on being creative.....u gotta paint a picture with words.....well u said this is old i dunno how old but im sure the next time u drop something new it should be more elevated than this.....good look though man keep writing ~1~
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