Voted For: Micsachek

yo yo, im hot on the mic, you's a newb, yer you hurd it
you picked that avatar, cuz your mind is deranged from my cursin'
when it comes to spittin dope lines, man, you really bore me
you diggin yourself into a hole, but this aint a fictional story*
your unequipped for battlin you aint ready for action
you gon' learn your skills from me like i was Samuel Jackson*
lyrically rampant, keepin my game tite
how you gonna succeed in rap, when you cant even spell ya name right!*


i think you had a basic flow with some aight rhymes you didnt have no big punches but you had some hits and you did your thing cool drop



one mic is dyslexic, he could put my verse up to a mirror and still not read my lyrics/
this kid is like a deaf cancer patient, hes just dying to hear it/
you not ready, i suggest you take it from step one/
you couldnt make "a-cut" even if you were edward sissor hands step son/
one put his verse on the heater just to get his "mic-hot"/
i garrentee i will sweep this battle just like the chicago white sox/
dawg im hurt you, you couldnt win this battle if text rappin was your virtue/
to much filler to search thru, this gonna be worst then when "john c." murked you/
you could stay on point but your raps will never be personal/
i will turn you inside out like body was reversible/
i dont know why you you try, we can see your nothing/
one mic raps like he's attached to a "e-z button"/
im going to stop now so you can save your dignity/
its like im your school bully the way i take this victory/

i think you really had a good flow some nice punches some old concepts that was decent i think you focus more and had a better verse

vote: micsacheck

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