im honestly not really feelin this one x...

the sample is too sped up, the drums are weak, and the snare is blah...

not one of your best by any means.

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My mom was playing that sample just this morneing, joe......I ain't gon dry snitch and say where it's from but I think you did a good job of re-creating the feel of the original....saying that I know you said Kenye West style..and you trying to have a mass appeal to get that dough...I feel that, do your thang..but the Kenye snare is starting to get really played in my opionon...but yhea thats the only thing though..the right emcee can make belivers out of this beat who think it's too soft.....

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Bang On The Table Productions

its the lo-fi version

the snare was changed

and syntax likes dog sex

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All Syntax Mastery Does Is Talk Shit About Peoples Beats...What Happened To Constructive Criticism...

Syntax...Go Bone A Child...
And Lets Hear Your Beats...

Alkatrakz... second payment sent. more money to come!

and yeah I am that "right" MC for a beat like this... ya'll gonna love it. i got first verse almost perfected...