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Eric89 = 32/50
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

LyricleSolja = 30/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

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damn alright check it...
punches-eric had some violent shit
flow-lyric had better word uses and flowed together good
begginin- lyric came out with a better start, ya eric all you talked about was killin this fool wit the mic, get creative and elevate
vote-lyric

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127760
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128381
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Eric took this one imo, his punches were stronger. both were equal apart from that tho, good battle guys.

can u vote in my battles now, peep the links in my sig. thanks.

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

lyrical
Yo we battlin on the front line,
so ima beat you over the head with the mic,
2/10 lines dont rhyme alright punch
and embarris the hell out of you so youll know what it feels like,
and stab you in the eye like the mics a steal spike,
4/10 and and and i gave u a 4 should b smilin
cause im willin to give you a loss that your due,
ill strangle you so bad ill make your pen ink turn blue,
5/10 gettin better punches you in 3rd gear now?
change the color of your loose leaf paper from those bullshit rhymes you spew,
so you need to quit cause you spit wack fire,
3/10 alright punch
so fuck Solja call me the sire,
cause ill murda this wack mcee wit his moms bra wire.
6/10 nice closer like that bra wire shit lol

eric
yo i tell ya ass good luck cuz u gonna need it kid
last time we battled u ran and hid
5/10 nice opener and dis
im throwin punchest stonger than Ali
dont pretend like u aint jelous kid, i know "u wanna be just like me"
5/10 good punch and uppin ur self
my flow'll leave ya mentally tramitised and scarred
better watch out cuz this spit is ill'er then sars
3/10 tell you the truth i fear sars alot more
my punchlines will leave ya face blushin and red
when people hear ur verses their first guess will be "INBREAD"
4/10 alright shit
line 9 and 10 this is were it really starts heatin up
cuz my rap career is like a volcano jus waitin to erupt.
2/10 i liked lyricals closer better


lyrical 20/50 (u lucky ya ender won this shit)
Eric 19/50

hey i gave an honest vote return the favor.... dont have to do all of them..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131129
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131098
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131070

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

I'm goin wit eric on this. He just had a better verse. Lyric you had good structure but i just wasn't feelin yo shit. Vote - Eric

P.S. - Return tha favor. Link in my sig.

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