^^wrong link my fault heres the link to my topical sorry but at least it keeps uppin the battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131966

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aight this was a good topical battle wun of tha best ive seen
x-yur verse was good nice flow everyting structure great i can really make a picture on waat u wrote so thats why its a good verse
flow u had a nice verse to but it wasnt that complex u kno u tlaked bout lotta stuff in jail but not really enuff bout life in it but yeah anyways u had nice flow and good structure i could make a picture wit yur verse but it was a lil "blurry" but anyways nice topical battle

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Aight Yo Check This..

X: 6/10
Your Flow Was Off Rhythem At Sum Points But Your Emotion Was Aight. Your Imagery Was A LiL Drastic At Sum Points Dawg LOL...But All In All Your Shit Was Nice. Good Drop.

Flow Intelligent: 5.5/10
You Almost Had Him Except I Felt That You Rambled A LiL Bit And Just Feel Off Point In The Middle. Nice Verse In ALl Just X Edged Out THe Win This Time. Nice DRop Though.

Vote - X

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alright this was an okay Topical.......both had good points....and everything else.....Structure I would have to give that to X just becasuse his was even all around and more put together.......flows wasnt that bad but it was a little stretched in some places.....Flow i would have to say that was a tie because both had good flow and i was feeling both the same......Imagery I would give thgis to flow just because i felt his had a little bit more imagery in it then X's......Creativity I would have to give the creativity to X becuase i felt this was more creative and more orignal with the insite and everything then flows........and Emotion I would have to say that X takes the emotion becuase i was feeling all the shit that he was saying and it had more emotion in his verse then flows

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