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Old 11-22-04, 07:58 PM   #1
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thanks for the feedback cats... uppin'.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 11-23-04, 02:00 PM   #2
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Wow y'all are majorly startin' to sleep on this one.... uppin'.
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Old 11-23-04, 02:19 PM   #3
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Hmm...a very nice piece. Flow and multies was dope...it was just plainly amazing. There are not much words to describe it.
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Old 11-23-04, 02:20 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback man...

greatly appreciated.
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Old 11-23-04, 02:26 PM   #5
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damm shitz tight blood nice flow an shit you doin this to audio if not you should nice vocab an shit good read
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Old 11-23-04, 02:27 PM   #6
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thanks man...

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Old 11-23-04, 02:43 PM   #7
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Please return the favor...

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Old 11-23-04, 02:49 PM   #8
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no problem.....
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Old 11-23-04, 03:02 PM   #9
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this was hot, yo.....good use of multis and vocab...this really caught my attention from tha jump...and thats rare, cuz most people dont warm up until a few barz in...so mad props on that....keep droppin tha fiyah mayne....

return tha favor, please.....'one wish'....
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Old 11-27-04, 06:46 PM   #10
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lol... thanks man...
uppin'...
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Old 11-27-04, 06:51 PM   #11
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ok good ass flow and vocab first verse was the best one but whole thing was real good your best no but good here all the same nice visuale i see your still mad about that damn suspension good drop a 8/10
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Old 11-27-04, 07:03 PM   #12
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thanks for the feedback Empire... just read your poetry battles... damn you still got it dawg... welcome back.
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^dude it's poetic, what did you expect? He believed his ex still loved him after cheating on him with 9 guys and 1 girl.

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Old 11-27-04, 07:15 PM   #13
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Painful Times at Lawson High...


^^^nice chorus...but i got an ear for rhyme...so, i would have worded it "awful times" and "lawson high"...get it?

ne way...i feel like shit...so imma make this quick

see...rhyming is in my genes

damn...there's another one


ne way...


some of the rhyming seemed forced...including your diction...it's as if you were using words just to rhyme...try rhyming like that in complete sentences...

otherwise...this was creative...I like some of your multies...needed more concrete imagery (similies, metas)

vocab was extensive


I arose from the ashes of hate clashes to attend classes and spit acid and hit bastards...
Im a phoenix... so you could call me state capitol... I got the ears of the people... white, black and all...
Three X I'm under rated leavin' whole cities evacuated when I come on tour cuz I'm flat out nasty...


^^^ That caught my eye


Good Job dawg

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Old 11-27-04, 07:24 PM   #14
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thanks man... appreciate it...
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Old 11-29-04, 01:55 PM   #15
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Yo... upping....
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