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Terse 5 83.33%
Elusiv G 1 16.67%
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Old 12-10-04, 07:57 PM   #46
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Oh...my Bad...good Shit (exclusiv G)...but I'll Up This Again For Yall...werd
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Old 12-11-04, 11:28 PM   #47
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why the fuck is this battle gittin slept on so bad????

uppin...
 
Old 12-12-04, 12:00 AM   #48
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hard hittin punches in my case, but i'm elevatin too. keep it up terse. i need to post more in order to vote
 
Old 12-12-04, 10:22 AM   #49
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Old 12-13-04, 05:06 PM   #50
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Old 12-15-04, 09:48 AM   #51
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Old 12-15-04, 06:28 PM   #52
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Old 12-18-04, 05:26 PM   #53
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Old 12-20-04, 02:32 AM   #54
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Old 12-22-04, 05:48 PM   #55
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Voted For: Elusiv G

i voted for acuity cause he had better wordplay andy his syllabels were tight rhyming was really nice flow was kinda choppy but still good punches hit nice hard and fast
best line-
Im learnin gradually, makin rhymin n beatin ma expertise
Ur ass so stupid still askin mama bout wats the "birds and tha bees
terse ya verse was good but it lacked a few things a nice flow but ya rhyming was good words were well put together good battlein both of u
best line-ya rhymes is ass...lemme show u how you're surpassed jack
puttin ya verse in uppercase, will only leave ya ASS CAPPED

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Old 12-22-04, 07:42 PM   #56
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Voted For: Terse

This Kid Took It Easily...
Elusiv Lacks The Hard Hitting Punches...
In All The Battles I've Seen She Hasnt Really Possesed Them...
Aiight Here's The Beak Down...


Quote:
Wordplay: Terse
Punches: Terse
Flow: Terse
Structure: Terse
Opener: Terse
Closer: G (Actually Like The Last Line)
Overall Enjoyment: Terse


Here's Is The Verse Break Down For Terse Since He Won...

Quote:
I laugh at u son, cuz u think u prepared ta' spit
but u wouldnt spit raw if u ate sushi widda hair in it

Kinda Basic But You Did Have Some Decent Wordplay In It... 7.3

in terms of talent, we can never be called equal
Elusiv's nice...but only cuz money's the root of all evil

Ya, Calling Her Poor And Whatever It Was Alittle Above Rv Though... 8.6

dont lie to yourself, u aint a real G that came ta' merk
shit, if u quit playin mind games, then maybe ya brain'll work

Calling Her A Retard, I See. Again Most Of Rv Wont Want To Think This Much About Wordplay... 6.5

ya rhymes is ass...lemme show u how you're surpassed jack
puttin ya verse in uppercase, will only leave ya ASS CAPPED

Was A Decent Punch, Kinda Liked It. But You Directly Said Ass In The First Line And Then It Repeated. Thats A No-No... 8.0

this battle's no where near close, EG's been ravaged to strips
even if this was down to the wire, this clumsy faggot would trip

Thats Pretty Weak. Who Says The Wire Is Low? That Not Really An Acuarate Punch... 3.2


Aiight And Thats Whats Up...
Not Really All That Great Of A Battle But It Was Aiight...
Some Decent Punches Thrown...
But Overall You Both Need Some Elevation...
And Terse You Need To Work On Verse Consistancy...
G, Work On Strengthening Your Punches And Getting More Original/Creative Wordplay...
Maybe Try Shortening Up Your Bars A Bit Too...
Your Structure Was Alittle Strechted...
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Old 12-22-04, 08:04 PM   #57
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Voted For: Terse

Terse...you owned this battle..it was one sided for sure....you came with dope punches...good personals...good structure and flow... and had a enjoyable to read verse. the wordplay was intellegent...dope drop....8/10

Acuitym -ehh came pretty weak compard to the verse spit by Terse...you gotta step up on your wordplay and on your punches and personals...your opener was wack...and the rest of the punches weren't to strong either, you had good structure and flow though...elevate fam and you be aight...6/10

v/Terse

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Old 12-23-04, 06:54 AM   #58
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Old 12-23-04, 10:15 AM   #59
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Voted For: Elusiv G

vocab-neither
punches-acuity
multis-acuity
strcuture-tie
my vote goes to acutiy...barely though.
Terse's lines sucked ass and acuitys was aiight...barely decent...but your closer killed all of terse's line..."Tearse go home, disperse, return once uve rehearsed
Ill hit ur newbie ass, make u bleed, like a virgin on her first//"
one.....
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Old 12-23-04, 11:53 AM   #60
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Voted For: Terse

wack battle by both..
one sided
Flow:Terse
Punches:Terse
Multis/Laughter:None.
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