lmao..alright..u say i have stretched lines, read it aloud and read wit the commas, ull see da pauses.

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you have ok well where does commas n stuff are at make another line it'll look betta and you structure wud look betta to n it wont be hard to read yo stuff

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

i got ya'll a sig somethin quick

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

^^nice sig homie you in da crew everybody rep da sig

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Yo Black Queen i Pm'd u take a look at it and tell me wuts up.......Pz

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Kamikazee

[B][CENTER]Tha Truth

good luck wit ya crew.....we know you deserve it

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^^thx Tech good luck wit wat you do

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Forum up erybody go check in

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good luck with this crew but when u ready to stop playin then holla at CODE STEEL...

female cub-fourm will be up strickly for ya.....

holla.....

code steel..

ColdStiLL~Tha MOVEMENT iz HERE!!!++

CHECKIN IN.....what up guttahz!!! Whats HOOD wich yahz!!

uppin...............

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Da Throwdest said I gotta drop ten lines and see what yall think so here it go, southern style:

Knock, knock? Whos there? Mr.Aimz, guns drawn
Southern nigga, still bangin- slugz in ya, stomach showin
Thas how we do in the dirty, we reckless
Take ya jews plus the necklace
Whats the use of wearin one if u 'neck-less/necklace?'
M-I-A is where I reside, on the block smokin up lye
Over the planes and the clouds- yes, gettin real high
U can catch a shell, 4-5th'll do ya well
Leave u more than a swell, nigga u goin ta hell
Im on rap verse, wrappin up a rap verse
Grand Hustle, ten times strong
When Keith Aimz get sign on, nigga....

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^Ready Fo That War....

"All This Gang Talk, Makes Me Wanna Choke You Red, Black And Blue"- Aimz

Dade County, 3-0-5
M-I-A 4 LiFe