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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

blah.........heres how i see it

Kesse:

declined the first battle, wasn't too sure if the second you would respond
shoulda withdrawn, cause when it comes to spitting crap, your one step beyond
lol...pretty good personal to play off his name...a few multis in this bar wouldve made it better tho...7/10

your not ahead of the game, i mislead with your name, so i'll tear you apart
rip out my "heart", give you a chance to "beat" me but you wouldn't know how to start
lol...that was pretty good....but the second line was stretched....6/10
kid says hes from "the bury", but thats just what im goin to do with him
like fat kids going on diets, your chances of winning are looking pretty slim
that was ur only structured line...but it didnt hit too hard..ive heard lines similar to this plenty of times....4/10
infectin you like i was bacterial, thoughta gettin d/r but couldn't like you had venereal
you winning? that theory is bull, ive seen better wordplay come outta my alphabits cereal
lol....damn that was hot....mustve been ur best punch in ur verse....9/10
throwing punches that cant connect..what'd you expect? cant win when you feed routine rhymes
you should post the new york times, give voters something interesting to read between lines*
that was pretty decent...but try usin multis....7/10
this is over now, people voting for you have clearly stepped beyond comprehension
cause, with your rhymes, the only chance you winning would be in another dimension
not so good closer...that was pretty played....6/10

OneStepBeyond:

This beef i'll treat no different... so lets battle, grab a bar,
your rap style is defined in 4 words... your avatar!!!*
i dont see nuttin in his avy that says this is bloody terrible...7/10
me losin, fuck that? you claim to bust gats, your stuffs trash,
say im comin to kill you and have you 'sneakin' out ya 'crib' like rugrats,
lol....aint heard a rugrats line in a while...that was pretty clever...8/10
really wanna battle? in a few you'll be hollerin TRUCE TRUCE,
how are ya'll so established when you listed under the new crews,**
lol...oh shit....that was a dope as personal...i liked that...10/10
Skill comin from you? WOO! finally i've been greated at last,
still lyrically compared to me, your fuckin eatin an ass!!
i liked ur verse until that bar...2/10
maybe i'll get a loss, i look on the brightside, so let me say again,
yeah i'll be 1 and 2... don't hcange the fact your Canadian...
blah...that was an aight closer...but betta den kesses

ehhhh.....this was pretty close but onestepbeyonds gonna get this one

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Voted For: Kesse

Okay...good battle here...

Kesse- You had a nice drop here. Some solid punches, a good flow and it was good to read. Maybe try to shorten your lines a bit because it makes the structure look weird. But it's all good because you used the same amount of words in all your lines. Your vocab was excellent and really added to your verse. Thre rhymes were good, and you came pretty hard
here.

this is over now, people voting for you have clearly stepped beyond comprehension
cause, with your rhymes, the only chance you winning would be in another dimension

^ Thought that was a solid original closer. Good drop Kesse.
8/10


OneStepBeyond - You came pretty good in this battle too. You had a good structure, it flowed well with some good punches. Some of the punches were a bit weak though, and in a couple lines it seemed as if you forced your rhymes to work. Example: the canadian line...

maybe i'll get a loss, i look on the brightside, so let me say again,
yeah i'll be 1 and 2... don't hcange the fact your Canadian...

^ Just didn't do it for me really...

6/10

Vote: Kesse

upppppppppppppppppping for one more f'in vote.....close this shit up

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

vote=onestep

this was a close battle for me. i'd put both emcees equal in personals, but i think onstep had slightly better punchz (e.g. tha establishment dis), and also a better flow and that won it.

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PS...vote on this battle...its been there for fuckin days..

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180996

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upping for some fuckin real votes here, fuck........

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