|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|||||||
| View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
| Tony Green |
  
|
0 | 0% |
| Red Bull |
  
|
5 | 100.00% |
| Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll | |||
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
03-20-05, 11:23 AM
|
#46
|
|
|
IP: 4A0A BEB6
^ Haha, Thanks.
...............................................Up. |
|
|
|
|
03-20-05, 02:36 PM
|
#47
|
|
|
IP: 4A0A BEB6
...............................................Up.
|
|
|
|
|
03-20-05, 02:53 PM
|
#48
|
|
|
The Epitome Of Greatness
|
IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Red Bull
Well red bull took this battle for 3 reasons. 1. His verse was more complex and the ending had a twist to it, While tony green kept his verse simple, and tried not to delve too deep into the topic which will always hurt you in the long run. 2. Red Bull took every aspect of a topical battle. He took the vocabulary because tony green didnt have much, the multies were decent. Your structure was definately better than tony's, his lines didnt even match up, i mean you gotta at least get them close to a decent syllable count. 3. Imagery and emotion was present in red's verse but not present in tonys verse, you had a little here and there but red bull went deeper into the topic. But red i would still suggest you stick to text or try elevating quickly with topicals because someone with more topical skills would have ate that verse. Vote: Red Bull
__________________
RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion  |
|
|
|
|
03-20-05, 04:01 PM
|
#49
|
|
|
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
|
IP: B525 44D9
Voted For: Red Bull
im votin fo red bull. red bulls finishin line wuz funny az fuck. and i liked tha whole story of it. Tong Green, i liked yo verse 2, but it just wuzznt az entertainin az red bulls. tont green, there wuz like bar of yo's that didnt rhyme. u both had good structure, u both had good flow. i liked tony green's verse cuz he sed it wuz a true story, but red bulls story wuz betta even tho it wuz a true story. no hate tony green, werd
__________________
R.I.P. EAZY-E  MoBB Squad
 REST IN PEACE MY MUTHAPHUKKIN SPICCA OMB!!!
 |
|
|
|
|
03-20-05, 04:30 PM
|
#50
|
|
|
~Real Rookie Of The Year~
|
IP: 0825 899A
Its cool fam Tony Green respects everyone's decision and Tony Green respects Red Bull good battle fam one day maybe we can have a rematch yall might as well close this Red has won good battle thou!
|
|
 
|
|
|
03-20-05, 06:37 PM
|
#51
|
|
|
Gods Of War! -yeah im one
|
IP: C2DF 7A85
Voted For: Red Bull
One word for this battle........WOAH! Il be honest i read Tony Green's verse and i really liked it. It was heartfelt using the topic well, a good story which was deep and pulling on heartstrings. Some good name drops and nice lines that made a enjoyable verse. I did think to myself that Red Bull wouldnt be able to beat it... then........... Red Bull's verse blew me away!! the verse was deep, the rhymes were heavy and was making it a real good read. I am quite lost for words. The twist at the end was the clincher. That finished it off nicely..
__________________
  |
|
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
