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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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yo thanks for the feedback both of you....
Tony I already posted on your open mic in your sig... Idyllic thanks for all the praise ![]() uppin'...
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This is so great I jizzed my shorts..
nah...nice verse overall but you getta 3/100 for not praising BC 45/50
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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BC is dope... there now you know I'm godly. thanks for the feed.
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Banned: Cheating
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word you had a nice hook there. some good use of metaphores, nice flow good syllable count. decent stucutre. yep this could be a OM of the month again word to what In Vision said. the imagery was very well done. im feeling this. i was flowin wit this to some ozone beat i found and it worked well. word.
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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iight man... thanks for the feed back.
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man this was cool, like yur usuage of vocab, structure was cool, flow was cool...different from most which is cool, like the originality...overal 8.98/10... I got a OM comin later tonight...rtf it'll be called Meanine Pants... Secretary of State signing out this bitch....
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damn man some good shit here nice metas wordplay was tight ya verses were very vivid...nice shit 8.5/10
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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thanks all three of you... either I've already left feed on your oM or I'll rtf... thanks for taking the time to read...
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The New King Of New York
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This is one of the dopest OM's i have ever read on here, EVER. Period. Emotions was good, crazy imagery, as soon as i started readin' this, only one thing came to mind, OM of the month, possibly the year. This shit was crazy nice, keep up that shit.
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I Thought You Left?
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Wow village...best shit Ive read from you...
The vocab was insane...Imagery in the hook was ill....the flow was good throught out...the structure was cool...u had some typo's but i dont blame yah, it was a long piece....very hot topic forreal...every thing was on point and in depth...9.9/10...fix the typos and oyu get a 10/10 ![]() Amazing piece man
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Loyalty proven
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yo nice shit man. im mad i put off readin this till today. some of the best shit i read in a min. me you and the real indeph gotta collab sometimes. you had so much raw emotion in this shit man. this drop right here definately deserves a nomination for om of the month. you got my vote man. SHit was beautiful. keep it up son.
RTF... when i get my om up
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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thanks y'all... I'll rtf on monday when I can get on a good computer.
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ahhhh, VP with another dope drop... you just keep em coming huh? lol nice shit, keep it up, this was sick, great meta's, nice flow, structure, good drop, didnt stretch your lines, I liked this a lot, 9/10
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This was a nice peice , i was really feeling it
the structure and how the verses changed sides Liked the emotions of this peice... had nice feeling and i was really feeling it .. overall this was dope , and i couldnt expect anything less then that.. Nice job :thumbsup: Keep up
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I'll tell the truth.. that was one of your weak open mics....
i just wasnt feeling it.. what happened man.. i luved all your other open mics... 7.8/10
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