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Voted For: DAZZLE

yo, whats up witcha name, 'dazzle'?
you put no thought in it like you was writin while havin an orgasm, i'll leave your brain rattled
^^flow is wack, weak punch
yo, the next time you'll hear this guy laugh,
they'll be dreamin, probly anxious to reminisce bout the past,
but why would they do that, you wack, so please, jus MOVE BACK,
^^no diss
unlike you, everythin i say is TRUE FACTS,
infact you could even be the next Jim Carrey,
hopefully, i wont have to repeat that line, you baffled by these styles that vary,
^^weak
this aint no joke obviously i was jus BORN TO WIN,
this guys so dumb, he'll post his verse, then say i shoulda, THOUGHT FOR THIS, i'll slaughter your shit,
^^nah
next time jus stop and think who you choose,
cuz now you're isolated like colin farrell in 'Phonebooth'
^^weak

man, you need to think of punches other than "like" punches and sort your rhyme scheme out


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Couldnt think of your own name, or u jus on james bonds dick?
I betta not mess with you, coz you be hooked up with gadgets!!
^^sarcasm punches are not effective
The newbie style of ya name make me gonna get this shit easy!!
Shit it dont even look like words...........More like an I.P!!
^^didnt rhmye, weak diss
The crew you reppin in ya sig...Tha fucks a Violent Tupe??
Couldnt get in one at RV,.......so ya made one up anyway!!
^^this is ok punch, but no rhyme!


both of y'all came weak, don't even know what to say. Possibly one mic was worse. so v/dazzle

I left honest feedback, so you do the same, link in sig, thanks

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

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