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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Lil C 2 28.57%
BLACK~MAGIK 5 71.43%
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Old 04-24-05, 10:06 PM   #46
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Damage this? Please, you can't handle this text
Especially since everyone of my lines she reads, Lil C's panties get wet
8...LMAO!!! funny opener!! i like a verse that has me laughin straight off!!
You're nothing but lame, face it, you're a fucking disgrace
Why Lil C look like she stopped a fuckin truck with her face?
7...LMAO AGAIN!!!! 2nd line was dope!!
I mean it whore, you aint ready, just leave the war
This sluts legs "stay open" like "convenient stores"
8...fuck me!!! roll on with the comedy!! gud meta to!!
I'll let the tech spray, I got shit to hit you quick
And you couldn't "get some dick" if you had a "sex change"
6...BOOOO!!! not funny now!!
I'ma rattle this hoochie, but this shit really aint fair
Cuz usually the rapper dont go and battle his groupie
6...ya losin it!!! DAMN!!!
I'll beat this whore to death, so please don't push me
Because I will "eat this pussy" like "oral sex"
7...HOORAY!!! a funny closer!!!

OVERALL: 42/60 (70%)




So put yo misses on chill, 'for you droppin' your guard/
This artist been scarred, his heart-is partly dropped till it's hard//
6...aight, ok multi!!

OVERALL: 51/90 (57%)


ok this battle is easy to call......black buried LiL C with his pure comedy in nearly every line. it had me laughin at the start and at the end!!! Lil C was droppin consistent average lines with a few weak ones and needs to work on that!! black, keep doin shit like this cuz it was prolly the funniest verse i've ever read!!!!
and WTF!!! LiL C u aint in Lyrikal Saigonz so take that out of ya sig!!!!

V/ - BLACK~MAGIK

RTF!!! links in my siggy!!!!
Further and further my verse is skirtin this broad/
If I'm unheard of, when you get word I serve the girth to your jaws//
6...not really feelin this line but still ok!!
Fifteen from a nine, OR, seven from fours/
I miss to mean a misdemeanor sent as heveanly swords//
6...a gud line but wording is not that good!!
Hell yeah, I put the motherfuckin SALT in his WOUND/
An alternate doom, dying when you WALK IN THE ROOM//
6...average lines again!!
I'm stocked with the BOOM, you runnin' out of the bland/
Up the prize and I supply that which runs around the demand//
6...well at least ya consistent!!
Spit a round at "The Man" and tell the cops it's on purpose/
I merk this, clown like, he's found in the CIRCUS//
4...BOOOO!!! played like WHOA!!
Ya clothes drop, the ONLY TIME you "peel" with ya men/
I rapped you up till you was "blunted" and I'm "SEALIN YOU IN"//
5...wack again!!!
The power's aroused, this coward's upped and opened his grill/
It's like, hittin's a game, so I'm, hittin' this dame/
And what the shit? the shit What you spitt-ed, shit you SHOULD be ASHAMED//
6...better shit!!
This bitch is paid on the 1st, and fuckin BROKE on the 3RD/
My shit is DOPE...... ya'll could up and try to SMOKE MY WORDS//
6...ok closer!!
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Old 04-24-05, 10:10 PM   #47
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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

i thought black magik had way more creative shit, but you really gotta fix your structure up man, some stuff didn't rhyme too well at the end....lil C, your stuff was too weak/basic, come out with more complex/creative shit and you can be fire, no hate, just what i saw........honest vote right here

/black magik....for having harder punches/personals, more creative/complex, and funnier, made me laugh
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