My boy took this one definately...................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,

PRETTY DECENT OPENER.

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,

NICE WORDPLAY, GOOD PUNCH.

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

HAHAHA, YEAH GOOD PUNCH, BASICISH BUT HIT HARD.

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*

GOOD PERSONAL AND PUNCH.

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...

GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE CLOSER,

NICE VERSE.

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Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest

DIDNT RHYME BUT GOOD CONCEPT.

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"

DECENT PERSONAL I GUESS, NOT FEELIN THE CONCEPT THOUGH.

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me

NICE PERSONAL NOT A HARD HITTIN PUNCH.

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

HEARD A SIMILAR CONCEPT, BUT MEH DECENT CLOSER
NOT BAD VERSE.

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OK, THIS WAS ONE SIDED NOT ONLY BECAUSE OSB HAD MORE BARS BUT THE CREATIVITY IN HIS PUNCHES WERE BETTER AND HARDER HITTING.

OSB'S FLOWED BETTER ALTHOUGH STANZAS FLOW WAS ITE APART FROM THE FIRST BAR.

NO HATE

RTF IN SIG SO I DONT HAVE TO DQ THIS MAYNE!

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good drop stanza......pollzzzzz...................

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Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
^^played out
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
^^agin...played
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
^^wak..didn't hit
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
^^okay
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
^^wak

Wak...it' all about metaphors and wordplay.You just too basic


Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
^^okay...1st line was nice
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
^^good
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
^^wak
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
^^okay...at least paraplegic is fresh

You had some nice metas and wrodplay,speccialy the 1st. line where ya ripped on his name.Ya got my vote

Vote-Stanza(return the favor)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795
^^return the favor or vote's dq'd.

well thats a hate vote..... just cause i voted against you a moment ago...

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yo.......i ain't even know...you voted against me.
And you claim I didnt post adequate feedback...so here ya go


OSB-Ight look,that Eminem/stan shit seems to be placed in every battle that Stanza is in.Punc-Kool Aid.Yeah real creative.You musta wrote thAT line and said"I'ma genuis,nobody ever came up with that sit before".Yeah right.Only time he grabs a win is when he's handin it to you?Again... done before.I saw that shit on Bboys.com or sumtin like dat and it was done better than you did it.Your shit is whack and I'm adding you to my blacklist.

Stanza-In your 1st bar...the 1st line was the nice.Unline OSB,you found a way to rip his name in a way that's not played out to death.A whole bar based on a personal...nice.OSB could only put one line.In my opinion,a verse has to have one personal bar.Both regamortis and Paraplegic are fresh concepts that neva been done before.

Vote-Stanza(rtf)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=195795


Fuck you One step beyond.When one of my battles close...I wanna battle.

^lol i think n e vote for stanza is a hate vote lol... n e body with half a brain cell can tell who won this... fuckin wack ass people voting out of spite.. fuggin 12 year olds i swear.. step to me on tha mic, where theres alot less dick riders.. i dare n e body.. you fuckers aint shit,, god it pisses me off how ppl like stanza get so many dickriders wen they kno theyre wack...

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza- your verse was pretty good i thought n all....punches ahhh they were pretty above average i thought...good enough...they connected n all...had personals in the verse which were funny at times n all...structure was pretty decent n all easy to read...but overall 8.2/10...Because you had better punches and personals i thought...

OneStepBeyond- your verse was pretty good too i guess...but your punches were a little weak...but then some were good and connected...as for personals you really didnt seem to have any i saw...structure was decent easy to read n all...but overall 7.8/10...Close Battle But i thought Stanza had better punches and way better personals...

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Thanx man .....Hey OSB This is gonna be a close one man

dis battle close but OSB had me dead laughin, fav line...

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,

damn, dat was hot

but i aint got enuff posts to drop a vote so imma post feed...OSB might win dis, but its close indeed...lmao

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB:

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch

LOL Good

Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,

LMFAO Nice

Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,

Good

"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*

Nice personal

O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...

LOL Nice closer man

You had a real good verse man. Short and sweet. All of your punches connected and hit him hard. You had a nice play on his name, and a few other nice personals. Everything flowed together fine so the structure wasn't a problem. Nice verse.

Stanza:

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest

Blah

Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic

Fake personal...his OM with Drakel had like 5 pages of responses

This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me

Failed to see the punch

Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match

WTF??? Doesn't make sense

Stanza, you came weak. Punches werent hitting or connecting, personals were fake, and you didnt have any good metas or wordplay. The only thing you really had was flow, that doesn't win battles man.

V/ OSB

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Voted For: Stanza

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
decent opener
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
no
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
no, this punch was wack
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
okay, could’ve been harder
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
nope

overall.. ur drop was weak.. ur structure was okay, the flow
was lackin’.. & the vocab needs help.. but overall ur punches
could’ve been a lot harder (don’t know how u beat me), but
elevate on ur punches

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
okay
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
this one was aight
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
no
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
okay, this bar could’ve been harder too

overall ur drop was weak also.. the structure was okay..
the flow was aight here, vocab needs help too.. & the punches
need improving here.. but they came a little harder than
osb though.. but elevate on your punches

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Damn This is close ass fuck LOL

Cmon Gimme the win PLeASE