bump dizzzzzzzzzzzzz...------------------damn i hate da 50 character thing

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT...
that fake quote,would probably work better when named.
weak start...

that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope...
yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope.
weak..

and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in...
nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence.
aight..

westside till you die,then after this you are midwest...
no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset.
aight

Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?...
shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez.
decent ending..

ya verse i thought lacked punches, ya flow was basic creativeness was basic, 1 or 2 decent lines that it i think u slept on him and it showed...
4.5/10



Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''*
''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar!
ha good start good punch...

battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline
0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time!
aight..

we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His
weak..

First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz''
ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN''
ha feeling this, good word-play...

if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs
..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs
1st line decent, 2ed weak...

I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids
only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids
aight..

Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow''
shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now
decent...

u had better punches, personals was aight, flow decent creativeness was on-point i thought u came harder in this battle good drop... 7/10

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Voted For: Indephz

that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope...
yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope.

Vrs.

Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''*
''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar!
battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline
0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time!
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His
First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz''
ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN''
if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs
..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs
I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids
only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids
Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow''
shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now[b]

[b]Overall All It Was A One Sided Battle....Nothing Really Big...Good Shit Fromut But Khaoz I Think You Could Have Came Hard Good Job Indephz....v/indephz.......~1~

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thanks for votin......................UPPIN.......

how the hell is that not enough feedback?....oh well

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Voted For: Indephz

good personalsindeph flow was good no filler straight forward work on ur vocab though but it didnt look like u tryed good verse over all
k work on ur personals theyre really corny and up ur vocab get some good metas
good battle but indephs verse was more personal and straight forward

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