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Why DR, why would he dr, he got cut from LL and fucked us over in a battle.

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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Daubs a real emcee?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer*
couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker
^^set-up bad,the set-up shoulda been a punch...3/10
You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope'**
Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope!
^^horrible set-up....good punch....5/10
You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds'***
Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound****
^^^OK......5/10
Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo****
Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo
^^flowed good...punch lacked....4/10
Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules
you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles
^^not much of a punch here....2/10
Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts
Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts!
^^Best bar so far.....7/10
eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel
Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's!
^^I hear this L/legend thing too much....3/10

Ok...good verse here.Your best bar was the Us. charts one.A problem I saw with your verse was that you set-up your shit badly...make the set-up's relevant to the punchline somehow so it makes it harder.As for your personals..mediocre.I heard too much L's/legend in your verse.Kinda redundant.OK verse overall.Coulda been better if you put more time into it.

Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown..
Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!!
^^punch was shit man......2/10
From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct..
Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!!
^^shouldn't the punch be about his location based on the set-up?...2/10
Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph..
And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!!
^^Nice......7/10
My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven..
And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!!
^^Good.....but i think you overused his picture..4/10
We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage..
I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!!
^^Played as fuck.....3/10
Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb..
Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!!
^^Horrible nameplay...2/10
This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word..
So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!!
^^again...horrible nameplay...2/10

OK...Saw a lotta flaws in your verse.First....your set-ups.Make your set-ups relevant to the punch somehow.It showed how bad you were at it in that criminal line.The set-up looked like it was gonna rip his location...then outta nowhere...you came with a "he ain't no criminal unless...".line.And the picture...once bar is enough...you overused it.That's a bitch move to base a verse around it.And the nameplay at end...shit.Just cause the some letters in his verse spell his name doesn't make it nameplay.

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RTF BELOW PLEASE.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538

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You had the battle re-opened after like a month of it being closed and you dont even up the battle either, what the fucks the point Daubs?

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

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Your an idiot Daubs.......

Clearly i beat you, but yet you wont see past your internet pride

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You need to delfate your e-ego.

We'll see, if you do props...

ima get people voting on it.

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