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Old 11-08-05, 10:58 AM   #1
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Originally Posted by Pressence

So nick,you are a man who likes forced wordplay and played punches


You forgot a couple of things.

I am also a man you've NEVER BEAT.
I am a man who has KO'ed you 4 TIMES already.
I am a man who is currently beating you in a 5th battle.

So in regards to you in general...
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Old 11-08-05, 11:01 AM   #2
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Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher
You forgot a couple of things.

I am also a man you've NEVER BEAT.
I am a man who has KO'ed you 4 TIMES already.
I am a man who is currently beating you in a 5th battle.

So in regards to you in general...



And what relevance does that have in this arguement..?
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Old 11-08-05, 10:42 AM   #3
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Yeah it's pronounced intresting, but because of the way he worded it: it's so interesting I can't help but fall asleep, he put the emphasis on that so I got it. So it wasn't that badly worded actually. But yeah it's a bit forced, this is what's known as text-only wordplay cos it wouldn't work in audio...but sometime you can get away with it in text
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Old 11-08-05, 10:43 AM   #4
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and pressence you didn't answer my question above
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Old 11-08-05, 10:44 AM   #5
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an example of text only wordplay which I used which I thought was pretty good :

I'm back n evening scores, while this ho struggles with simple metaphors
Ya writing style? No one'll digit...........after I break all ten of yours

you'd let me get away with that in text even though dig it and digit don't sound the same...wouldn't you?
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Old 11-08-05, 10:51 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by Vaskez
an example of text only wordplay which I used which I thought was pretty good :

I'm back n evening scores, while this ho struggles with simple metaphors
Ya writing style? No one'll digit...........after I break all ten of yours

you'd let me get away with that in text even though dig it and digit don't sound the same...wouldn't you?


Yeah, that works.

It just amazes me that a lot of people comment on your shit saying "oh well it was kind of forced a bit, you shouldn't do that" and then they go and drop something like.....

Fuck you, ya don't know how to beat me...your "clueless" fag..
cuz you've got "no-eye-deer" like a "blind fucking stag"..

...and they think that ^^ is dope
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Old 11-08-05, 10:48 AM   #7
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not as hot as the digit bar
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Old 11-08-05, 10:48 AM   #8
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No,I wouldn't let you get away with that shit.
Spit that shit in real life..and then look at the audience and you'll see why.
 
Old 11-08-05, 10:49 AM   #9
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ahhh, the science of wordplay..............preach on fellas
*puts dollar in offering*
 
Old 11-08-05, 10:49 AM   #10
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duh, this is text, there IS a separation between text and audio, in case ya didn't notice
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Old 11-08-05, 10:52 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by Vaskez
duh, this is text, there IS a separation between text and audio, in case ya didn't notice



So..?
Nowadays I just ditch the whole text thing.
I spit diss that people would get off the bat regardless of text or audio.

I don't write to be a textcee,I write to be an emcee.
 
Old 11-08-05, 10:56 AM   #12
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^^err ok, yeah I agree that wordplay that works in text AND audio is the dopest, but you get some which ONLY works in one or the other. Like a dope punch by Nimrod against Scribe in a legendary audio battle only works well in audio:

And I don't need a biographer, I can describe myself ...in text you might be like wtf??

but in audio you realise that describe sounds like diss Scribe
dopeness
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Old 11-08-05, 10:58 AM   #13
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anyway, rhyming is dope, but I already have a career so it's just a hobby for me, I accept I will never be among the best, so I just do it for a laugh, cos I love rhyming and wordplay. Hell I might even do some more and good audios some day
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Old 11-08-05, 11:02 AM   #14
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umm...i think we all specialize in different types of text
different types of wordplay..........
i try to dabble in it like you guys talk....but its not really ME
it depends on how u word it too...........wording can ruin your wordplay
or make it good
 
Old 11-08-05, 11:16 AM   #15
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Hmmm the simplest way to knock someone: take what they have accomplished and say it doesn't mean anything. Hey look he's the best audio MC in the world, but it doesn't mean anything compared to being the top scientist in the world in a particular field. It's all relative
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