For now you would. Give me some time, cuz whether you like it or not, I am elevating and eventually we will battle. Have fun while you can Will. px

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You ppl suck balls.

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Sounds liek you're using the default sound-sets which means that all the beats sound like gameboy beats. The assembly is good, but the default tones blow. Remember that Fruity Loops was originally designed to make videogame beats and tones for cellphones and shit liek that, so if you want to make music that's actually listenable, you gotta get other soundsets, sample, or drop FL completely.





You still sound exactly like Carson. Flow, delivery, lyrics, even your voice. You should stop rapping for about a month so you don't have this pre-conception of what your style is and jsut re-invent your self. Qual's good, but marketability wise, nah. No energy (which dosen't mean shouting), no cadence and a 1-syl rhymescheme. Old. House of Pain style. BTW, you need to do a lot more solo songs because it makes you look like you have a REAL low writing out-put or are just lazy.




For starters, it sounds like you've got a ferocious lisp. Your flow is texty, like your lyrics are there but your delivery is flat as shit like you're always depressed, even when you're amped. Your vocals have no mood at all, which makes you sound soul-less no matter what you're saying. Get drunk some time and record, you'll see wht emotion in lyrics should sound like. Your flow goes off at times. I don't gotta tell you that your quality is against the ropes and your mic is boo-T. Sounds like you got an accent on your R's and a's wich throws me off sometimes. Just dosen't sound liek you're agile while spittin yet, sounds liek you're tripping over your tongue. You need more time to solidify on your flow and learning to EQ wouldn't hurt you either so you can get some more body out of your mic. Get a pop filter, because your music is useless without it.




Your beats all sound hurt as hell to and it's because you're not using hip-hop instruments at all, you're using techno and D&B instruments and trying to use them in a hip-hop way. Those sounds are cool and all, but remember that the original music it came out of has about 12-20 different sounds all going on at once and the pace is high, so the music sounds a lot thicker. On your slower hip-hop beats with way less sounds, it sounds empty and boring. They also lack any flare and in most cases, a hook.

Your rhymes are okay. You're bout where I'd expect an average person to be, you just need more time to polish off because your flow is rushed sometimes. I'd say about 1/3rd the time from what I've seen. Just do more flow checking, because if you think you sound off beat, you do.

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I just nutted to that track......

death jizz

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

i think spul might sound like that cuz hes from Mass btw..... right?

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

nah. That's like saying all rappers from where ever the hell you're form all sound the same. Maybe Carson was his Idol or something. I dunno the cause, but I DO know the effect.

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lmao what track?


but yea, thanks for feed Apexx.

and lol nah, carson wasn't my idol. Didn't like him that much really. But word, I'll see what I can do.

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Can ya leave some feed on my song? Reminiscing is the best in my opinion.

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don't blame a dudes wackness on their location... I've heard illy rappers from all over, and hey.... I'm from Canada and I ain't that bad :\

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Hopefully you'll change that, dog
and word @ everything else
:-( @ lisp.
Niggas on here have said that, but I dont hear it

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Nah, fuck that.


I'll do the rest of what ever links are in here when ever I get around to it. this is so far off the back burners thta it aint' even on the stove.

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