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Voted For: Natural killa

NK is fucking shit, and this beef lover’s got serious hater vision
He the only dude who’ll track cats who drop wack,
And try and sue them for plagiarism.
We all laugh at you retard, I’m a joker so I’ll have ya clowned fast
But ya don’t need to be the butt of my jokes, your already a fucking ass
Apparently you’re “Coming to kill us all”. So, I’ll be quick to floor ya
Yeah, ya lines can kill us all, cuz dawg…they’re fucking torture!!
Yeh, you smelly fucking hobo..ya shit I just need to fucking bin it
..so I’d take out the trash can, if you weren’t sleeping in it.

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Me spittin' wack....is unheard of,like seeing this nigga with gats,
I'd say Nick,ur' dope as fuck!!...just to make a lie bigger that that^
Don't feel blue,cuz soon..ya inmates will rip the buttons off your chest,
"My ASS is going to prison!!" <-----see,even you know what to expect
I'll leave u seein' strife after I finish wit this 'n give ya heat wit joy,
but then again..you got more time on your hands than Rolex delivery boys
chewed in the gauntlet.,like nothing,and you've been abused in the on-set
cuz' how you gonna hate,and call me wack.......but go re-using my concepts?
Stop biting,cuz ur' your line compared to mine,just looked sloppy like butter,
you not only suk at writin your OWN rhymes....but u suck at copying others!!

wow what a battle.. i seriously didnt expect this outcome. but natural killa came harder with more quotables. geeze Solo i'd be getting a rematch after this one cause he just came better..

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thx for the vote 'n I also voted on your battle with my pressence account...so..yea.

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How can L.I's vote get dq'd?
Not like he's some random herb on the site or anything...

fukin stupid...

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Voted For: Nick Fletcher

Natural Killas Verse

Me spittin' wack....is unheard of,like seeing this nigga with gats,
I'd say Nick,ur' dope as fuck!!...just to make a lie bigger that that^
^ quote used nicely...personal effective but it may be true

Your skils too bitter to craft..anything that'd be dope,your past it,
& an assualt charge?..yea,cause your the one who got their ass kicked
^ lol ok bar felt the punch

ur' punches are elastic,& i'm sick enuff to spit & kick ur gut-in,it's true,
your so much of a fag .........that 6 months in jail is nothing for you!!
^ na not really feelin it 1st line was off flow wise 2nd line lacked

Don't feel blue,cuz soon..ya inmates will rip the buttons off your chest,
"My ASS is going to prison!!" <-----see,even you know what to expect
^ good bar good personal...better than previous bar

cats aimin' for your neck,even when u was Ice-D,u couldn't stay and chill,
& I'll throw u' in the "dirt",cuz your verses don't show a "grain" of skill
^ personal on his name (good) dirt & grain was ok good layout

In this battle,your lost wit what to do,your left alone just pullin hits,
& i would say "I'ma shit on you!!........but u already seem to be full of it
^ ok bar not the best one you put here so far

Our battle in 04',and my verse..you made sure to go & feed on it,right?,
& you made 200 lines on one Open Mic?..GODDAMN!!..someone needs a life
^ personals but not amazing though

I'll leave u seein' strife after I finish wit this 'n give ya heat wit joy,
but then again..you got more time on your hands than Rolex delivery boys
^ 1st line self glory...meh 2nd line coo setup nice punch

I see ur' expression..it's more pale than when the wind blows up yo' skirt,
u' fucking suck ...all the cats "skim" through your verses like frozen yogurt
^ yo skirt & yogurt...hmm weak rhyme but ya accent might make that rhyme fair nuff...nice bar though

I Told you to kiss my ass and then saw you getting all rowdy with cheers,
u typed up your WHOLE Rv history,in detail.................and then nobody cared
^ cheers & cared though doesn't rhyme

claim to assault?..well do it again..shit,I'll even toss you a gun or a knife,
so ur an RV legend?..wow,too bad your not even close to one in real life
^ assault bars again...not amazing bar again

You got no friends or a girl..ur' only left wit kisses to blow that aren't real,
No one's heard of the name Nick Fletcher....aside from those on RV
^ again no rhyme...

Your only know to harm keys,from newbies..imagine YOU without them,
so go "ghostwrite" for "mystic"again ..none of us can see ur "magic" wit the "pen"
^ ok bar nothing amazing AGAIN





^ Quotes used effectively nice pick up...

chewed in the gauntlet.,like nothing,and you've been abused in the on-set
cuz' how you gonna hate,and call me wack.......but go re-using my concepts?
^ Nice bar...but a name like mystic chaos...you would perhaps see that idea used more than just the once...like Dog bars (my name)

Stop biting,cuz ur' your line compared to mine,just looked sloppy like butter,
you not only suk at writin your OWN rhymes....but u suck at copying others!!
^ carried on aight closer ok diss

Overall
Good verse...some bits were better than others...quotes were cool...flow was aight in places...rhymes fell off twice other than that good rhymes basic...nothing too hard (which is good IMO)...cool verse...but i think you shoulda tried to be a bit more original and also places coulda been worded better

Nick Fletchers Verse

Check,
NK is fucking shit, and this beef lover’s got serious hater vision
He the only dude who’ll track cats who drop wack,
And try and sue them for plagiarism.
^ intro...lol @ plagiarism...coo
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He wanted to be a Muslim, but his ass couldn’t get thrown in
..he even prayed to Allah, until he fucking owned him.
^ multie ok bar coulda been better

I’ll fucking eat your shit for a win, and kid you ain’t got no answer
Cuz you get beaten by biters, and I don’t mean how ya lost to Stanza
^ lol @ the personal...good bar

Halfway to posting his pics, but then Natural took another look
And realised the truth, who wants to look at an ugly fuck!!
^ look & fuck = no rhyme but diss is there

Natural’s a solo runner sayin fuck crews, I guess ya not fussy
You saying that you run by yourself huh,
..but who needs help to be a pussy.
^ fussy & pussy although looks similar don't rhyme but again diss is funny though

N’s going through a phase, saying he got girls, I’ll fucking break ya fads
Only girls shouting “Ohh Naturaall” are in fucking aromatherapy ads. *
^ LOL dope bar like them herbal essences adverts lol

Natural, ya can’t back up ya talk, who you gone plow into the ground
Shit, in the tag tourney ya even had backup,
And still got knocked out the 1st round.
^ cool personal liked this bar

We all laugh at you retard, I’m a joker so I’ll have ya clowned fast
But ya don’t need to be the butt of my jokes, your already a fucking ass
^ ok bar...coulda been better though

Shit son, I know your fucking game, hell you bit your style from Daz
..except when he dropped wordplay, he didn’t force it like a spaz.
^ 1st line = could be i seen Daz type like this 2nd line LOL nice diss and rhyme is funny

Apparently you’re “Coming to kill us all”. So, I’ll be quick to floor ya
Yeah, ya lines can kill us all, cuz dawg…they’re fucking torture!!
^ Multie...i laughed at this bar...funny humour style

I hear ya eager for an award, just to prove you ain’t a beginner
We don’t do “Whoring of the Month” though,
Otherwise you’d be 12 times a winner.
^ lol good diss original

Only thing strong about you is ya odour, I don’t know what to think
I mean you’d be a shoe-in for success, if ya feet didn’t fucking stink!!
^ nice setup 1st line 2nd line good diss

Yeh, you smelly fucking hobo..ya shit I just need to fucking bin it
..so I’d take out the trash can, if you weren’t sleeping in it.
^ ok diss...concept ok...nothing special though IMO

Motherfucker shit talks on UK accents, now I could squash ya joy
But I won’t talk on someone so retarded,
..he prolly sounds like Adam Sandler in Waterboy.
^ LOL nice bar...being from UK...i prolly feel this more...

I’m through with your bitch ass, dude you’re a fucking disgrace
I see wackness in my eyes so dude…Get The Fuck Out My Face!!
^ good closer

Overall
Again...nice verse...however a couple of bars didn't rhyme...but connections were there...a few multies thrown in...disses were effective some comical ish in there...i actually laughed @ 2 bars in particular...i think you had the same sorta level verse as NK however i think this verse you put out was the more consistant and had some more original bars than NK's...also i like the humourous type disses better IMO...

V/Nick Fletcher

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