11-9.....appreciate all the voters............going on till tomorrow night....keep em commin....this is what i call a close battle......1

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they were both harsh, i could feel this was some harsh shit to come out and say. i have read both of yalls other stuff b4 and I dont think that this was either of you'z best. it was kinda of weak in a strong way. yet kids kill themselves everyday and dont really take the time to think about it yet grownups killing their child is another, people dont come up and talk about that everyday like they do homocide or suicide
vote-13

11-10 ... this ones gona be a nailbiter for both me and 13th...

great luck dawg...

these were two great stories....really fun to read but over all 13ths hit me harder...i love the way his stories are based on real life occurences....it makes them more emotional

vote=13

alright, 11-11 ... shit this is comin real close down to the fuckin wire.... make sure you actually read both verses before voting, and make sure you are not a hurb before voting.... thank you to all past and future voters...

good battles guys i cant vote cuZ im new


Mad Man: Then why did you post?

Ok, Yes, this battle was pretty close, 13th came with a nice take on the topic, good storyline, vivid imagery and very descriptve at times, you gave a nice insight into the killers other side, nice touch.

Surreal came good too, very nice story, great emotion and imagery, again, you held me captive til the end of your verse, and the multi's helped too with the flow etc.

In the end it came down to personal preference i guess, two good takes on the topic, both had nice imagery and emotion but i was leaning more towards Surreal, his just got me into the story more and kept me hooked. Nice battle though guys, neither should get disheartened with the loss here.

Vote: Surreal.

VOTE - SUREAL

REASON - I juss thought his verse came together more...flowed better, etc...both were ILL verses, don't get me wrong...but liek sed earlier in dis thread, it wuz sureal's endin that sealed tha deal...

PEACE

alright, 13-11 ... thanks alot for the enormous response to my verse...and for all of the votes that have been directed towards both parties (13th and myself)

ok this battle waS HIZZZELLAAA TIGHT i read sureals 3 times n 13th's 2 times
AND IT TOOOK HELLA LONg lolol

but it was worth it but i felt 13ths alot cuz he stayed on topic tha whole time n he has a nice story lololol

sureals whas tight also i liked it i read it a 3rd time cuz it was so close but in some places i didnt like it but its coo

my vote:13th cuz he had a nice spit n STAYED ON TOPIC THE WHOLE TIME ALOT OF PROPS TA YA KID NICE WORK

alright, 13-12 ....

this shit is close...

I am totally blown away by both emcees, I mean both came hard and fast, but I was feelin 13th flow mroe then Sur, so my vote is 13th.

Vote-13th

Okay heres what I thought...

13th had me interested through out the whole verse, I wanted to finish it instead of reading the first couples bars. I could imagine his verse with ease, his vocabulary and detail was definitly a HUGE plus in getting him this vote...

Sureal was also very detailed but I felt like it was cut off, the ending was very well written but I didnt feel the alter ego/insane part of the person through out your whole verse like I did in 13th..

In topical I feel image is such an important part off the verse, because when you loose your audiences attention then you wont gain it back.. 13th kept me intrigued..Sureal had me at the end but the begining took to long I feel.

Vote: 13th Diciple

yings vote should not count... he joined this month ... did not explain well.. and ... who cares about the flow.. its not about the flow... its about the structure of the verse and the words within...
no hate towards 13th, but i will fight this one...

should be 13-13...

i know you would say same if you were in my spot right now...

but i would fight this one ... even if you were ahead like 16-2...

cuz its not well explained at all , and he's a hurb...

If Agreed, then votes are 13 - 13

But If You Want His Vote, Take It... - Sureal