iight now lets go back a verse
all deez niggas and hands down dat was da worst
cphers aint 4, you neither is RV
u should quit, yo shit wack, i had 2 say it im sorry
you act like dem bitches i'm maury
confused, lost and helpess nigga tryin 2 rap
dis nigga... can be all 50 states
and still yo rap won't appear on tha map

iight dats all me... somebody dis me now

Mr.Washington

I Shine like a star and i dont give a fuck who you are
Ill Burn ya Skillz into Tar,If we had a Skill match im winnin by far
Now im not suppose to crack on people but this Kidz the Worst
He Spit the Shit dogg Mr.Wasingtop Missed his hole Verse

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

ill whip his ass
and in spittin ill roast um
whats that a gay dateline
that picture you posting
still wishing you hoping
you could actual see me
but the streets like jail
and the only thing you running is p.c

i aint wanna flip on this nigga
but i got a complex illness
im real real sick of this nigga

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

Now dude be for Real this cat aint jokein
His rhymez are wack and more writein like a book by J.R Token
now I like Vocab dis dude got his from his Nefew
I Tightin a rope around ya neck and u gotta be Best-Blue

man i will neva flip on bitch when i aint serious na mein 1

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

yo how dare this coward insult me on vacob
especially when his is so bad
he can only hope he a problem
he jumped on my dick
like hos around and i he the open condom

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A.I

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

i don't gotta diss ya ,ya lines already diss themselves,
ya corny kiddy lines stick out like deformed ugly elves,
making lines that don't make sence is your big issue,
so stupid you bragg ta ya boys when ya ma kisses you,
kids gettin mad cause he's gettin dissed on his vocab,
n rymes bad?so i think my next line should send ya ta rehab,
ya predictability is relevent,ya concept is like ya life its "sellibet"
ya a wack minority,ya infinately mocked n ridiculed like a deliget,

dee - ve - ate

dissin you is an easy-gate to a cypher,
its like I'm playin da pied piper, son, I'm gonna lead u to the river,
Raps like he's on so much pills he's got no liver,
Well lets get this straight, im a taker and he's a giver,
he gives week lines and i take em to the gutter,
wanna beef wi me, ill take ur dick to a window shutter,
have it locked so that ur own fidelity is ridiculed,
cant stick to no fucker cus its iddy biddy miniscule!
Enough talk about dicks, half you fuckers'l be erect,
none o'u can rap, not only DV8, ya got no intellect,
Hey, I'll give you 10seconds to disconect,
You fuckers think ur poets cus u rap on the internet,
Seems to me, half of you couldnt keep a beet,
Far too "country" to ever be street!
So, go back to ya mommyss and daddys and give em a kiss from me,
Tell em, I said "this one is for free"

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Hmmm. Pink lettering... Damn I hope you're a chick//
Really believing you're nice... How much more gay can you get?//
From now on you're a femcee... I don't care if you'tre a girl or a guy//
You can only get so far... When half of your words didn't rhyme//
What type of lyricist will kill a bar... When your still spiting it out//
You're so illiterate... You had to sound the last lyricist out//
What an idiot... Look at your two records and say you have intellect//
When the one in your sig say one win... And that shit ain't even correct.//

Yo, all i need is one~hit, one~wave to wreck nigga's cyphers//
Fuck full grown, i'm full~prone, stole candy, ... and GFX wet diapers//
Son i was born country, and its a def. you couldn't handle it//
Ya on the road to success, protest against me, i'll make you abandon it//
Can't stand this shit, mess and i'll leave ya boy scramblin'//
Make it so every~time you look, ya shit hit the fan again//
Decreasin' the hatin' and debatin', as my rhymes increase penetration//
Not elevatin', so i lit him up a few times, now he's levitatin'//

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Born from the infurius flame,.. here to inflict grammatical pain

Battles Need Votin:
Thumper Vs. Spittin~Bulletz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140454

Thumper Vs. JaC M. WrIgHt
http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=1477088#post1477088post1477 088

now dissin THUMPER

yo rhymes was weak,
soft like a wet rose petal
bitch got his name from a game
playin da old twisted metal
remember thumper? his car was purple
nigga i'll hurt, yo momma need 2 re-birth u
cuz ya rhymes aint neva alive
it already seen da light ( died )
you know they told ya a lie
if they said ya rhymes is tight
quit now and make u a alias
maybe u should name him mr grimm ( twisted metal star )
cuz ya punches jus swing and miss
ya need 2 die jus like him ( mr. grimm )

yea b4 da next person dissme tell me if it was ok...

No. No it wasn't. Don't structure your flow like that:
Rhyme
Line
Rhyme
Line...
Go like this:
Line Rhyme
Line Rhyme
If you have to, seperate it with some symbol or something. For example: Hyphens, Periods, Slashes, etc. Basically, do it how we do it. Try to make sure your lines end near the same place. Now on to the verse...

So you dissing another... Because of his character base's car color//
But you wearing purple yourself... Plus you're an ugly motherfucker//
Your style is garbage... Notice I still haven't mentioned your skill//
Which doesn't exist... You'll enter a battle with a baby and get killed//
Don't even come in this thread... You get shitted on with ease//
You came here trying to look tough... We look at you like "Nigga Please!"//

That shit was garbage. Rip me for that one.

Wats next?
this nigga named GFX thinks hes da best...
But he beta invest ina vest, to protect his head an chest...
so ur gona get popped, an dropped...
an im gona be up da top...
an my glock wil hav u runnin up da block...
so guess WAT? u got SHOT...

FAGGOT!!!!!!!!!!

What a dick.

Oh my fucking god... How can I contend?!//
Even if I tried my best... This faggot's gonna take the win!//
Obviously he's better than me.. since he can't spell correct!//
Plus his structure's garbage... he definately deserves my respect!//
Goodness gracious! Four posts!... How am I gonna beat the best?!//
Plus he's using played lines!... I'll bet ain't nobody even seen them yet!//
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^lmao^ nice new style of writin yo ... but now i gotta rip ya

~how u gonna get on him~ when u still a newb yourself~
~how u gonna get a win~when u know losses and nothin else~
~GFX u only got 46 post and u gettin on your family~ ( newbies)
~ ya legs must be broken cuz yo rhymes can't even stand me~
~ 708 has spoken.. ya bitin and cheatinscreamin BAN ME ~
~rhymes likes Stan Lee, silly lines strait out a "COMICS" book~ ( comic as in comedian)
~ u couldn't learn how 2 rhyme if u copped a hooked on phonics book~