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09-26-05, 07:17 AM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
^ok ok my bad, i was busy i get to that right now
uppin!!!!!!!
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09-28-05, 01:37 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin............................................. ..........
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09-28-05, 01:58 PM
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Bringin The Rukas
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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
IP: D8CE C87F
pollz........................
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09-28-05, 08:21 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin....................................;jfd;lajf d;klsjafdasf;dasjfkdas;
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09-28-05, 08:32 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 9457 B83E
Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos-Alright, ur verse was structured very well...i liked how u structured it...it had a very good flow...you had a good creative setting to your verse...good concept..you stayed on topic through out the whole verse. but i feel u lacked good imagery..but u had good emotion... by far my fav line which was better tahn all of his put together Haulted in my sentence i was not able to speak fully to this man Talking with great anger his speech is like an illegal contreband overall 8/10 keep it up Barr-Your verse was ok, ur creative ness and emotion was good....but the way u structured it was quite annoying..i feel you need to up on ur structure and vocab and not use such simple context...thats all really...its one-sided overall 4/10 v/mystic chaos
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