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04-06-05, 04:34 PM | #61 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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Did you not understand it? I'm confused... Oh well... not everyone likes everything everyone does and in this case I guess this just wasn't the type of OM that you like or maybe you had too high expectations or what not... I'm not goin' to hold an opinion against you and I hope you read some of my OM that come after this.
If fact Imma quote you yo! Thanks to bonecollector & ~Genius~ for leaving feed.
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04-07-05, 06:10 PM | #62 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 9875 12A2
uppin' for feedback.
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04-07-05, 10:37 PM | #63 | ||||||
THE COUNCIL
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IP: A0D7 7569
A pretty good peice. I'ma break it down like this.
Lyrically-wise, this is one of your best pieces. The imagery is on point and the descriptive words you chose really helped to paint this picture. When I was reading this I kinda felt like you took your time writing it, cause it came across thought out, and deep. So how much time did you spend on it? Now, as you may know, when I listen to a track I'm listening for one thing, that's lyrical content. I hate these rappers like 50 cent that only talk about money and bitches and getting shot. I mean it's reality so I like hearing a bit about it, but I enjoy seeing the discriptive ways someone can convey that message across. To me that's what you did here. You took some of the harsh reality's that some people face and delieverd it in such a way that is art. What I didn't like..... Basically, this is just constructive criticism, and because its so easy for someone to drop some feed and just say "yea your king shit way to go." Nothing major though but there were a few lines that I wasn't feeling as much, ...too long since you all kids felt the drummin' It makes my lost lamb of a soul more wicked... ...my principal's punchin' my one way hell borne ticket... A few others but all-in-all, this peice should be up for drop of the month. ~Vinch
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04-08-05, 05:23 PM | #64 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B3E3 2C43
Thanks Vinch... I appreciate it... upppin'... will rtf
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04-08-05, 05:50 PM | #65 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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wooheee., damn vp, you gettin some imagery in that piece,.off the wall with metas, man,seriously i aint read a nice piece like this since nos n in-visions drops...definately om of the month material...the title n the moving the text to the left?? was that a coincidence...i think not...lol....i liked this man
i aint gonna stick it with a grade or #...just know it was nice....props . pz..........RTF
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-19-05, 09:46 PM | #66 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B3E3 2C43
Thanks man... uppin' for more feed.
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04-19-05, 10:08 PM | #67 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
can you RTF, i left some good feed
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04-23-05, 06:24 PM | #68 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: 3E60 38C3
I thought I did Kesse...
I'll get to it next time I have some time though... Uppin'.
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