Voted For: Chaos

what the fuck with these long ass drops...............


Tephlon..........nice drop, ya structure is still workin for ya, ya shit flowed well mos def..........although i am yet to realise what the constant .................... are for, that shit is just unnecessary filler.....ya opener was wack, the structure was off there yo, and the overall feel was weak......the closer was better, a nice meta and it rounded off ya verse......in between ya had sum nice punches, some hittin hard, but a few just wack yo, vocab was nice and wordpaly but you cud up that some more....personals in there...nice but ya need to come harder to beat the experienced vets.......overall ya verse had ups and downs so i give it 6/10


Chaos.......flow was nice, some stretched lines but didnt really affect it too much, ya structure obviously was poor, lines stretched but i guess they are the same length at least.......ya opener was dope, a nice hot multi and the 2nd line was fuckin hilarious........finisher was dope to, some more multies in there and a couple of nice metas to finish off......in between was pretty much the same ya stayed consistent with ya shit.........hot personals and shit which clearly gives you this battle......wordplay was dope, multies were nice and overall ya verse was hot.....just work on that structure mainly........overall 8.5/10

V/ - Chaos

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