Black Dragon, you got some really good shit there, but it lies more in your songs. With your disses, it comes out okay, but it trails like you can't think of much to say after you've spit. Also, it comes out a lil bit slow, more like a Ludacris type shit. Speed it up a lil more, and think of more concepts so you can spit longer. I noticed, like I said, that songs are your strong points, so to strengthen your battling verses, I want you to join the Audio League that Mikez is in. Maintain your Soundclick with all of your battles so we can hear them. Like an elevation project.

Oh yeah, to my three audio heads, do any of you do beats? 'Cause if you do, that'll be another area for ya'll to cover, get known in.

i like the a new angle on dopeness thats straight.......

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Word. Me too.

But yo, go to Front Lines and get in a battle.

im tryin to ............................................

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heres 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...492#post2136492

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yo 'preciate all da feedback..........

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thanx emx...and quksand was me....i put an affect on my voice...and i posted up a call-out....and im in text too

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Oh. LOL... Sounded like a kid.

Welcome every new person. Whus up

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Fuck You

uh huh?!?!??......................................... ....

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Ur not 1-0 yet, Retro. You don't get a win if your opponent never checked in. That's why it doesn't show on your battle record.

sup crew. damn, alotta additions since i been out. cool shit. internet isp over here on the westcoast been having problems. i should be good to go come next week.

and hey hemz, i`m 0-1 =)

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Degree.

I know, beyotch.

Oh yeah, we got our forum. Everyone who wants the password, IM me. GHemZ Master.

i know that lol...............................................

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