Originally Posted by Crazy Hades

Coming from a thirteen year old white kid everyone says looks like he's seven...

HAHAHAHA. Omfg. Alpha's pic could only be gayer if he was wearing the lower half of a teletubby costume and crossing his legs, while sipping a wine cooler and eyeing a muscular young man on the other side of the bar.

Originally Posted by leady

lmfao @ this kid actin hard, u look softer than a pillow

Originally Posted by cu cullian

honestly dude judging jus from that song alone u hyped your self up way to much to be alot better than u actually are, i aint sayin it was bad but u seriously hyped yourself up way to much and to be honest if u never went on so much bout how you aer gonna be leadin austrailia rap n shit man then i wuda said it was decent for rv but instead u made yourself seem like u gonna hit the scene like a new 50 in a sense of impact

but for feedbk eh to be honest i cudnt understand most the shit u said i only started to understand u a good bit on the kweli beat n i never got your accent till like the beat changed twice or 3 times so i tinhk u might be forcing your accent not to be as strong which is koo cause i wud do the same if i was tryin to break america but dont do it unless u can hold it for the entire song altho i got to say a 170 bar song shudnt be used to judge that

honestly ill wait till i see a normal length song from u before i honestly judge not cause i cant play attention to a 170 bar song jus cause i know to spit that much is hard and your voice cant stay the same the whole time and so many reasons to y the song aint your best cause of the length so ill wait till i hear more shit from u

Originally Posted by cu cullian

eh ye i commented on all that in my first post

dude seriously learn to take critcism u drop this for feedback so i gave u it dont get pissed jus cause i aint like omg nos u are so dope ima d/r u now so i can say i knew u wen u get signed, i mean my feedbk wasnt even negative so jus chill man learn to take it all in your stride

Originally Posted by cu cullian

honestly dude judging jus from that song alone u hyped your self up way to much to be alot better than u actually are, i aint sayin it was bad but u seriously hyped yourself up way to much and to be honest if u never went on so much bout how you aer gonna be leadin austrailia rap n shit man then i wuda said it was decent for rv but instead u made yourself seem like u gonna hit the scene like a new 50 in a sense of impact

Originally Posted by Drakel

g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-g-UNIT FUCKAHS!

Originally Posted by Nostradamus

Originally Posted by Nostradamus

And boom, thats the end of that clown.