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l.i. 4 44.44%
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Old 12-22-04, 05:22 PM   #61
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just checking the polls hoes

but looks like a close battle but im not gunna sway

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Old 12-22-04, 05:24 PM   #62
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my bad didnt mean to do that it was just supposed to post as feedback...


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Old 12-22-04, 08:17 PM   #63
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Old 12-25-04, 02:41 PM   #64
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uppin this.....
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Old 01-06-05, 08:36 PM   #65
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Old 01-29-05, 02:50 PM   #66
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uppin this old ass shit.....

been here for bout 3 months now
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Old 02-12-05, 01:06 AM   #67
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Old 02-20-05, 05:17 AM   #68
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L.I.: enjoyed reading your piece although your approach to the topic wasn't that original maybe.Didn't use too many dictionary words and you didn't keep it too basic either so vocab was good.Structure was good, maybe you can divide it into several parts which will make it easier to read. Like how the story progressed and it had this emotional yet powerful vibe over it which I enjoyed. Had your flow on lock, not that much imagery because you said everything just the way it was, "in your face" sort of attitude. Good drop for sure!

Dabatos: I absolutely LOVE the way you handled the topic, very orginial so props for that.I like how you divided it into different parts which makes it easier to follow the story and it also looks nicer for the readers. Found a good balance with your vocab, didn't get the feeling that it was too basic, remained easy to read and follow. Loved to read the progression of the story,nice imagery and the emotion was good as well.With the last part, you desribed everything so good that I got the feeling I was standing right there and watching it all fall down.Tight piece!

My vote goes to Dabatos because I was feeling the approach of the topic a bit more buty both did very well!Nice battle! Please return the favor...(link's in my sig)
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Old 02-20-05, 11:41 AM   #69
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Old 02-25-05, 04:34 PM   #70
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Old 02-25-05, 10:53 PM   #71
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im gonna have to say I.Mind takes this one.. came harder with the emotion and flow... the whole verse sounded soo nice.. when on the other hand LI's got choppy thru out... i loved all the imagery from both although i think Imind took it in that category as well... and u both told the story soo well.. i actually got into it as i was reading.. iight no hate.. just being honest.. pz..
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Old 02-27-05, 03:48 AM   #72
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Old 03-01-05, 10:26 PM   #73
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Old 03-07-05, 10:18 AM   #74
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Old 03-08-05, 11:48 PM   #75
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I THINK L.I HAD A MUCH BETER ALL AROUND VERSE THATS WHY HE GETS MY VOTE
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