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| NaRc-UzI |
  
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07-27-05, 06:10 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
narc uzi: This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted ^^^GOOD OPENER...I WAS FEELIN DA LIL MULTI AND DA PUNCH WAS COOL Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home ^^LOL...GOOD PERSONAL Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul ^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless ^^^NAH You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY ^^^EASY & THEORY DONT YHME FAM...DAT WAS FORCED khaoz theory: Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley ^^^LOL STEP YA RAP GAME UP...DIS WAS MADD WACK yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya'' ^^^LOL NO....U TRYIN 2 HARD nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor ^^^MATRESS & ACTOR DONT RYHME.... i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI ^^^WHUST UP WITH YA VOCAB FAM...I KNOW ALL ABOUT SLANG BUT U TALKIN RETARDED u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked'' ^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ....WHEN U GON SPIT A HOT LINE?? i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW! ^^^HE SAID A RAW LINE IN DA PROFILE LINE ALREADY..ITS PLAYED Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz! C'mon dawg.. Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz! ^^^C'MON DAWG & CUTZ DONT RYHME lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers if u ever got signed.... .........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances ^^^BEST LINE U SPIT....LOL NARC TAKES DIS EASILY...KHAOZ HAD TROUBLE MAKIN HIS WORDS RYHME...AND EVERYTHING U SAYIN AINT MAKIN NO SENSE OR ITS REAL WACK...NO IM NOT HATIN IM JUST SPEAKIN DA TRUTH
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07-27-05, 06:24 PM
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aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
oh yeah and return da favor ya'll........
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07-27-05, 07:49 PM
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Vote//KhAoZ ThEoRy
both of you need to elevate alot. the structure was offset so it made the read a little harder and the flow blah. but overall the vocab was alright. the punches on both sides were decent. but i thought kt's made more sense neither of them hit as hard as they prolly should of .. i suggest you learn how ot set it up. but otherwise eh battle both of you need some work..
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07-27-05, 11:05 PM
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#64
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This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
IP: 0BF7 B2B3
Post in our battle already.........................
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08-02-05, 05:38 PM
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#65
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IP: ECB3 36A0
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08-02-05, 06:11 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: BD78 BFC2
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Close battle here for real. Flow-Both got tight flow here.But I think Khoaz had his better.Narc got better structure though.Khaoz...I don't like all those dots,bad spelling,and this(").If you had enough confidence in your verse...you wuldn't need that. Punches-Narc.While Khaoz had flow..he really lacked punches.Khaoz had some filler in his verse too while Narc was on-point. Personals-Narc.Both had the same type of personals about RAw and shit.But I liked Narc's nameplay. Multis-Both try to elevate here.You guys had a couple here and there...but nothing special.That one syllable rhyming has went out of style in the days of Eric B. and Rakim. Originality-Khaoz had some played lines about strippers and wheelchairs and stuff Tight battle Vote-Narc(vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=202755 |
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08-05-05, 10:32 PM
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GeNeRaL
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IP: B376 58AD
uppin............................................. ...........
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08-06-05, 05:04 PM
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IP: C6B7 3DF5
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
the battle was good. it was a close battle, but it wasn't hard to pick my man narc as da winner. Punchlines- both were satisfactory, but narc won that battle. Flow- Narc again, Khoaz joint was to hard to follow while Narc joint was well written for the viewers. Tips- none, any dude on here battlin don't need no tips, just come hard everytime. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-09-05, 09:59 AM
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08-09-05, 01:53 PM
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IP: 05EA A558
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08-10-05, 07:25 AM
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IP: ECB3 36A0
votevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevotevo tevotevotevotevotevotevotevote
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08-10-05, 09:01 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: NaRc-UzI
Dawg beatz on newbs, rec full ov ''smoking herbs'' lyke bob Marley N.U iz gangsta?...he aint never ''ridin'' lyke wheelchair patients on a Harley a played concept but u couldve worded it better yuh flowz cant harm-me, if u try ''droppin bombs''..i'll find a shelter bitch nigga..........ya raps iz stinkin!....even blind men aint ''felt-ya'' now this is played =\...gotta start bringin that fire man nobody smelt-ya, ur rhymes iz slept on like a dirty matress u can call me director da way i ''take shots'' @ diz actor again not bad...but wording still needs work! i'll subtract-ya metahpours, brake 'em into two'z, u LOSE-G Got diz Narc wannabe woozy when i clap with the UZI good at all u need alot more than ur skill 2 move-me, I'm built lyke a lyrical rock u'd think diz lame rhymerz a BIRD....Cuz ov da way he always gettin ''Mocked'' i liked it i'm prepeared for WAR, Got da real fam behind me, Leave u SORE check ur profile..u love us so damn much, U STILL THINK UR REPPIN RAW! okay personal..not worded well though Fuck diz i'ma go out Hardcore, while narc stayz catchin Nutz! C'mon dawg.. Why u mad 4?...It aint my fault u aint RAW Enuff 2 avoid da cutz! self glorifying..not good lyrical slut, u step 2 any talent & ''back down'' quicker than Pole Dancers if u ever got signed.... .........u'd prolly blow it all, & buy ghost writers wit ur advances! noooo. bad closer man Kaoz - Your verse wasnt horrible like some of the verses in FL. You had some cool concepts but you need to work on wording them better. A couple of yor punches hit hard and that got you some points. Flow was alright, a little stretched sometimes though. So keep working on it, not a bad verse. This bitch is not gifted if he was crack not even a crack whore would be addicted Lets be serious he has a lesser chance of beating me than a landlord getting evicted not a bad meta. good line Khaoz must be an Armless father cause he could never really seem to hold His Own In his profile it says that Living Legends are his crew but he says that RAW is his home not a punch...t'was a statement! Homie im able to bring alot to the table while spitting fire like an erupting volcano Khaoz is not a smart ass cuz he give alot of brain but he also demands alot of anul lol wordplay was nice. impressed me here Batteling me whats the purpose the only way youll win is if god switched the verses Your like a gothic person praying in churches cause like his prayers you are worthless na, bad metaphore. You dont have to fear me but when i come to RAWs forum and chat you better take it EASY I would smack your ass if u come near me cause you bringing KHAOZ homie is just a THEROY coo nameplay. original in my eyes Narc - You had a semi-consistant verse here. That smart ass wordplay impressed me. You had some nice punches. Flow was good. I thought you came just a tad bit harder then Kaoz in this one. An evenly matched battle. Good job guys. Keep battling and keep getting better!! Hit up this slept on link with an honest explained vote. Thanks! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198200
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