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Old 11-13-06, 02:25 AM   #61
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ehh..Past Tense im only feelin that one track you made where you talk about life basically. talkin bout your dad and fallin away from church and all that.
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Old 11-13-06, 08:32 AM   #62
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ehh..Past Tense im only feelin that one track you made where you talk about life basically. talkin bout your dad and fallin away from church and all that.

Then you obviously haven't listend to any of my recent tracks

www.myspace.com/pasttense360

peep any track on that page

Always on My Mind is old though adn kinda wack

but Dreamin is sick yo
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Old 11-13-06, 09:11 AM   #63
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lol
you cant make people like your music Past Tense
calm down
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Old 11-13-06, 02:00 PM   #64
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Then you obviously haven't listend to any of my recent tracks

www.myspace.com/pasttense360

peep any track on that page

Always on My Mind is old though adn kinda wack

but Dreamin is sick yo



So umm...yeah i still feel the same way. You can't force people to like your music. If they're not feelin it, then they're not feelin it. Do you honestly think that EVERYONE likes Jay-z? or even 2Pac? No.
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Old 11-13-06, 02:03 PM   #65
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lol implicit you change on me soo damn much

first its "I WANT TO WORK WITH YOU AND MAKE THINGS HAPPEN"

to a "i'm not feeling it"
lol this is why u all make me laugh
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Old 11-13-06, 02:07 PM   #66
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rofl...........................................
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Old 11-13-06, 02:15 PM   #67
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no....i'm wack!!!

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I like the way you combined with that hook added or w/e. I like what your sayin, good topic. True Hip-Hop feel yup I done a track wit trip bout the same deal. Uh Your hook is good nice and soft then the verse hits with emotion deadly. I like the change of pace to the beat. Oh yea and that ebat is good nice shit. Pretty solid track man, I'ma download it haha. Got me trippin after a big session.


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What's hot:
Vocal/track quality
delivery/tone
bass in the beat (haha*have a system now*)
Consisteny of energy in the track
What's not:
Common lyrics in spots

Overall:
Very professional sounding track here.
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Listenin'...
Intro is nice, I like this...
Beat is ol school..sometimes the drum is soundin like it skipping nah mean?..
PT...verse this is pretty hawt mayne...
I feel the way u switchin the flow that crazy...and u talkin about hiphop in it essence...but it losing it i know what you mean...
flow throughout is hot brotha...delivery is real good..quality is nice fam...
I like how you jus spit it all throughh nah mean... and the hook is dope fam...
feeling this joint right here..
beat not rlly my swag but u rocked this hot..
keep doing ya thing mr PT...
I like ya outro btw, the way u talked it out...
nice shit dawg..


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the beat is dope as hell.....flow is def on point....lyrics are up there too....everything i've heard from you has been dope....back to the song....beat fits the subject.....emotion is perfect for this joint....just really feelin this joint fam....good work....9/10


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wow..really feelin this so far......like the message.....flows good....lyrics not super deep but it's tight man....lol...man i do relate to some of it here........real talk here tho pouring your heart out.....good stuff,,,,,nice to see someone be real once in a while...nice track bro


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beat is smooth and just so cool..i liked the intro!..yeah u got a pretty good delivery,flow was just on point and i like switch..lyrics are so damn real and tight cos i'm like in the same situation...hook was iight but ur emotion on it was kinna too soft for the lyrics!...keep it up PT!



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aiight peepin....
like intro you like "dreamin' way my life", beat fits too. dope....
oh snap this like some old school beat. feelin' this man.
like your delivery. nice and laid back... wow and then when you switch it that's tight.. LOL @ found like pennies under a couch. hook is illness. fire
second verse nice too. your emotion is dope for this beat, all fits tight. good shit
hook again. dopee
like the heavenly gates opening up, is this you lord? damn dope outro too man.
def a dope track yo. really feelin' this man. keep it up props.. 9.4/10


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love the intro, beat is hella dope, love how the songs starts, who's beat is this? is it a producer on soundclick, if yes please post the link, like the emotion, man this song is fucking dope, flow is perfect...........* downloaded *
Speats
this your best track def. man wow bravo



Very Professional Sounding? and how many "wow's" did i see up there..........

oooh yeah this is all for ONE SONG lol
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Old 11-13-06, 02:39 PM   #68
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who gives a fuck all hes sayin is not everyone is gonna like you.........ive bumped one of your tracks
heard that bape shit......couldnt get to listen to you again..........and its not hate
i felt ya diss just not my thang............same with implicite
not everyone got to like ya shit and u def cant make them by posting that post showed me you have a big head about yourself........
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Old 11-13-06, 02:50 PM   #69
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man

I dont even give a shit no more
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Old 11-13-06, 02:51 PM   #70
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that woulda made sense from tha start....................................
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Old 11-13-06, 02:52 PM   #71
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Honestly....you all just make me laugh

simple and plain

say this and that...then BOOM turn sides.......lol nothin but backstabbin bafoons

like they say

TRUST NO ONE

and thats what i'mma start doing

the first step to success is being cocky
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Old 11-13-06, 03:00 PM   #72
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to a point being cocky....................not on rapverse.................and not forcing people to bump your shit
thats not being cocky thats being retarded and stop puttin me in your shit convos......i never once said your dope..........or was anywhere near your nutz.....i commented on one track.....thats all............i happen to think your pretty cool and sure u can spit never said u were wack either did these guys just they wasnt feelin ya..........u getting upset over it just seems like you really aint ready for a music career cuz if u cant take sum net kids from rv talkin shit bout ya music....how u gonna deal with it when/if u get big......an tha media and everyone is on your ass...and a whole country shit talks.......its tha way tha world works man...............dif music prefrences doesnt mean hate.......i just think u need to get some thicker skin cause this shit shouldnt eat you alive like it does
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Old 11-13-06, 03:01 PM   #73
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an u got ya steps backwards
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Old 11-13-06, 03:03 PM   #74
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It doesnt' eat me alive..but just it pisses me off that people who wanted to "work with me" and wanted to actually get shit poppin turn there back...i could care less if you feel my music..i dont make music for anyone but myself....what I write comes from my heart.....just that backstabbing is whats got me goin....thats all

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Old 11-13-06, 03:25 PM   #75
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WTF @ this nigga Past Tense gettin an erection because a few niggas on the net said you had ONE good song.
Calm down, stop lettin a lil good feedback get to your head.
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