like this one

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Anger management , Latinkitten . . Structure does'nt matter ? But flow does - makes no sense
Because you cannot flow with stretched lines.

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Not quite legendary yet....

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats why I post at RTM and UPN.... The two most respected sites on the net...

LMAO

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he is right tho..this site is gettin a bad rep now

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a line is only STRETCHED if u have no multies n u get to the end of the line n u dont even know what u rhymin it with...FLOW is different than structure...structure is how u put it together,if the ideas connect n how u set up ur punches....flow is how it flows when u spit it....something can flow but the structure of the punch could be wack as fuck.............
n native...sorry i dont make it a priority to "respect" net boards lol..i dont give a shit who thinks what netboard is the most respectable..fuck all netboards n netcrews this shit is all for fun..n i've beaten all these fucks who think they makin a livin out of it,i think thats fuckin hilarious....

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I doubt you've beaten anyone worth mentioning....

And try converting those stretched ass lines into bars....

Lets see you make two lines with 50 some odd syllables into an audio bar.... IT DOESNT WORK

So yeah.... structure does matter

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u keep ur shit too short,so short u cant even fit any multies in..it wouldnt even sound good in audio...u keep it short cuz i bet u have trouble stayin on beat,like most of these fucks..lol...thats what the weak fucks do
n u know someone is WACK when they COUNTIN SYLLABLES HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH...get outta here kid...stop tryna get fame on a fuckin netboard who gives afuck who respects u,who is respectable on a netboard???noone to me.....
face it.. U'll never make it,i know that u know that...there are 9204923049203420342390 million peeps on here thinkin they're rappers...n even more on the street...n u need to be somethin super special to make it,n ur lines,they hardly worth mentioning....n i bet u's a white kid..prolly like 17 or so...

now u go count some syllables while i go do some real live shit...hahahaha...n i aint talkin bout rappin

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Damn i noticed you been righitng about 20 lines of beef

while chrit has been replying with 1 or 2 line`s.

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cuz he cant really back what he is sayin....cuz whatever he is sayin is irrelevant..like netboards,n who respects who....n u? damn,its sad the way u're ridin him,then u talk about all the dick riders on this board....

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this board has the WEAKEST PUNCHLINES i've ever seen....when i came on this board,thats what i noticed first..n the dickridin....n how would ppl improve their punches,when the ppl who are supposedly the best are weak themselves???

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If you want to focus on real life....
I battle in real life... I win money from it.
I've had radio play... you havent.
I've recorded with known artists in my area... you havent.

How can I say you havent done these things? It because you completely discount syllable counts. If you knew anything about music... about constructing an audio verse you would know that syllable counts ARE important. Until you actually get into the specifics of hip hop, do not act like you know something.

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Chrits right look at my recent battles....he's brought me to the light side.... thanx man.... i completely understand....

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I dont like stretched line`s i hate them.

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yea,u focusin of a friggin $800 audio tourney on a damn net board...if i wanted to....i could be doin all that...u playin urself if u dont believe that...as a female,i have a LOT better chances of makin it than u,or anyone on this board...i have a handful of competition...n u have 9420492340234923409234029420492304234...ok ????
n i've never seen any female with even remotely good punches...lol..n the ones who have a good flow on the mic are busted as fuck lol...n c'mon yall know looks do count for a lot when it comes to females...but fuck all this,i dont care that much i do this for fun....if i put as much effort in this shit llike yall do...daaaaaaaaamn..god knows where i'd be....
n i have a lot of musical background...i dont count syllables cuz i have an ear for music i can tell what is off beat when i spit it...n text...it dont even matter,when do u record ur text verses? never....my audio verses are a bit different...text verses are mad easy to spit though...n fuck puttin an effort...for what? so some net clowns whom i'll never meet can give me props lol fuck that

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