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flow2crazy 3 37.50%
The Kid P-Dizzle 5 62.50%
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Old 01-12-05, 12:22 AM   #76
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Voted For: flow2crazy

this battle was aight. alotta word play, and alotta punches and sharp mettas i seen in here from all yall. yall all dope, but here is tha breakdown 1 by 1:
PHANTOM-ur verse was coo.Ur all-around structure was terrible, and i wasnt feeling it at all. I couldnt understand it, and im not simple, im just sayin u left out words and letters and stuff that made ur verse sound illiterate. With that being said, i seen no punches in there that made me wanna get hype. but ur hottest line was "globetrottin basketball freak, the way he always juggles balls"-that was hot...but i would give ur all around verse a 5/10, cause i wasnt feelin it...
Flow2crazy-i think u won in personals in this battle. that was a big boost to ur team. u came hard in that category, but i think u lacked creativitie. esp. in ur rhyming patterns. i think they were a lil to simple, but no doubt, u got flows. ur all around flow was tha hottest in this battle to me...
9th degree-i think u murdered everyone in punches. u came hard in that, and ur rhymin was coo. i liked tha framed pitcha back in tha first bar. a nice opener, and u were consistent thru-out this whole flow. u never fell off, and that gave ur team points.
headgames.- u started off wack. ur verse was ill structure, and "ill" as in poor. ur personals were wack. and ur punches were outta tha question. but u did manage to pick it up a lil later in tha flow, near tha end, when i thought u were done.lol...creative. and u merked them all in tha closer category.that was flawless...but i think it was a lil too late...
overall-i still dont know who won this. imma haf;to break it down for yall....
opener-9th degree
punches-9th degree
personals-flw2crazy
mettas-headgames
multies-none that caught my eyes
structure-9th
hottest bar-phantom
hes keeps droppin like this and hell never get no love at all
globetrottin basketball freak, the way he always juggles balls

closer-headgames
rhyming-flow2crazy
all-around verse-9th
9th-u made it close for ur team...but since this is a tag battle. i gotta go with tha 2 whose flow was both good...

sry...HONEST THO..its just one vote tho, dont trip...

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Old 01-12-05, 12:27 AM   #77
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Old 01-12-05, 10:57 PM   #78
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ok flow ok shit kinda streched in alot of places vocab couldve been way better punches and personals were kinda weak here as well a 4/10
phantom and 9th good flow and vocab one of 9th lines is streched as fuck otherwise ok good punches and personals the both alais in the same thread dont fall for ya headgames hahahah dope!!7/10
with better punches and much stronger personals 9th and phantom took this battle headgames word on punches and disses.
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Old 01-14-05, 07:33 PM   #79
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Phantom:

watch how i flowcrazy, and just for the record
im flows dad so hes actually flowcrazy the second
meh…decent here, wasn’t feelin it much tho…kinda hit short
hes the homie but i gotta merk, its all gravy ya see
his periods could overlap and he wont flow as crazy as me
decent punch here, overall it landed though
headgames plays with himself, shit its part of his name
asked him if he likes ass he said "its all IN the same!"
decent punch, overall it landed
hes keeps droppin like this and hell never get no love at all
globetrottin basketball freak, the way he always juggles balls
kinda weak here…but it connected

9th Degree:

Whoever said you was a dope head was playin' games wit'cha
I spoke to you online, you're more of a square than a framed pict'cha
meh…decent opener
I've seen ya lame script'chas, just retire, your name's dead
We don't fall for your headgames when you post both aliases in the same thread
decent multi’s here…& nice persona
And Flow-jo's trippin' on the blocks, gotta be quicker, g
The way you rep the I-L-L straight up sickens me
kinda weak here 2nd line was good though
Here's a tip from me, don't bite more than you can chew like old ladies
If you flooded a psychiatric ward you couldn't flow crazy...
decent closer here, kinda same concept as Phantom’s but w/e. good closer

Flow2crazy

Just a kid, cant run shit...better stick to the coffee shop
You couldnt beat me alone so u had to do it co-op
weak here…2nd line could’ve been harder though
Like pepto bismol i got u on the run
Couldnt understand ur punch until you wrote a caption
decent punchline here…
This niggas rhymes are "haunted" by a "ghost" wit no skill
Couldnt post ur pic big cuz u thought looks could kill
decent punch here, it landed…nice p
Ashamed to show ur face in public thats y u needed that site
Surprised ur name aint "tyson" wit the way that u "bite"~
played concept here, decent closer though

Headgames

Phantom...
Sayin Trigga got no game you dont get "head"...
you on "dome slumber"
His ass couldnt get "play" so he jagged off to a phone number
decent punch here…yo structure kinda fell & lost me there though
"Phantom" is on permanent "ill writer's block"... he cant think
Yo "rap papers" are like "fake ghosts"- just "blank sheets"
decent

9th degree

you want the battle to get "hot"... well wait after your turn
fuck tha "third"... my rhymes givin you "9th degree burns"
meh? Wtf here…no
Forget a stage man, give up your fake "degree" as a rapper
you couldnt get "cheap applause" if you dropped in a "dark room" with a "clapper"
decent closer here…nuttin much though

Overall:
I think 9th Degree/Phantom took this one…punches were hard hittin &
Landed…had nice persona’s up in there but overall they had a betta drop
Flow & head both had decent drops…but those dames links got on my nerves
You used to much of it just in one damn drop
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