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Old 11-02-04, 08:39 PM   #91
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Yeah Naptown Crisis dats my nigga
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Old 11-02-04, 08:40 PM   #92
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yeah if you know G from there or something then you know hes dope at audio...and thats weerd wigga..
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Old 11-02-04, 08:42 PM   #93
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Fa sho X, Anamasity, try to shorten your approach in the fewest of words........

like this (quick freestyle)

I split braincells and translate lines to sharp swords,
Attack their thoat, and leave their mouths open more than street hoars....
Step to da reaper, is like givin your soul to a great cause
The time these niggas stood a change was when da beat paused.....

somethin to that effect........
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Old 11-02-04, 08:52 PM   #94
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^dope lines for a quick thing dawg...
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Old 11-02-04, 08:58 PM   #95
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Somethin like this
Dezz niggas dont wonna feel my holo tips
Im bout 2 teach all of these niggas that my AK runs faster then they lips
And i aint Georgie Bush or John Kerry i dont need votes
Cause my bullet runnin down yo mouf and are more suver then strep throat
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Old 11-02-04, 09:23 PM   #96
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Somethin like this
Dezz niggas dont wonna feel my holo tips
Im bout 2 teach all of these niggas that my AK runs faster then they lips
And i aint Georgie Bush or John Kerry i dont need votes
Cause my bullet runnin down yo mouf and are more suver then strep throat


saying votes and throat dont rhyme and you forced the 2nd line...and dont edit yer words like mouf its mouth dont fuck that up iight it throws people off...but yer stucture is a lil off make it like this:

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^^kinda like one straight line down the middle gives good shit...and yer punches need work but that will come in time after being here for a month or so...
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Old 11-02-04, 09:29 PM   #97
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OK i get u dont force shit into a line if it cant fit right
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OK i get u dont force shit into a line if it cant fit right


dayum its hard not to force shit i cant do it, its impssible lol...i was gonna show you but like i meen dont foce yer rhymes to work...you know...
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Old 11-02-04, 09:46 PM   #99
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but i dont wonna say some weak shit in a battle
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Old 11-02-04, 10:05 PM   #100
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but i dont wonna say some weak shit in a battle


hmm weerd i guess...well hmm its hard to explain cuz me i cant write a verse thats forced lol...ill try

bitch you cant suck a dick even if you were a mothers sick...
i know its bad for me to explain this shit but ima prick....

^^some wack shit the 1st line was the forced line..Mothers sick dont make sense thats forced...heres soem shit its still wack but heres some none forced stuff:

Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…
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Old 11-02-04, 10:09 PM   #101
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i wanna join this man. lemme in i got lots of talent.
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Old 11-02-04, 10:16 PM   #102
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so u say just go wit it like this

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smoewhat like dat
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Old 11-02-04, 10:18 PM   #103
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how u keep gettin all these new pics on yo profile and i cant even get 1 of em
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Old 11-02-04, 10:21 PM   #104
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yo get @ me. answers.
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Old 11-02-04, 10:24 PM   #105
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so u say just go wit it like this

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smoewhat like dat


no thats just stucture...keep it lined yes...but dont force yer rhymes is what im saying...
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