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Natural Killa | 1 | 16.67% | |
Spektikul | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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12-22-05, 03:26 PM | #91 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0BF7 B2B3
uppin.............................................
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12-23-05, 05:30 PM | #92 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 803A 1DB4
uppin.............................................
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12-28-05, 02:51 PM | #93 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Upping............................................
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12-29-05, 08:42 AM | #94 |
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 2248 AF51
Voted For: Spektikul
Ight ima have to go with speks verse because you had punches multis and personals in this 8 line verse vs natraul killa. but Natraul you did good too this was a very close battle with multis and structure and everything else too. Oh spek i like the minimum wage line man keep it up both of you nice battle. my vote = Spektikul |
12-30-05, 01:39 AM | #95 | |
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 1535 7F4D
Voted For: Spektikul
And I seen ya' last battle,a win..against appoc..nice job,hold it true, But then again,it's a little too bad..that only newbs and herbs vote for you I'll Demote ya' too..cuz your wack 'n try to hide it,I'll bruise ur kind, cuz your the 1st dude to be undefeated in record.......but lose 7 times vs. Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age? Ill kick your nuts & rob too, gimmie all the cashew got on you You say your reppin Trinidad, shit, Ill just drop an fuckin bomb you Ill admit that on this site, you deal with lots of different choices I chose to write this battle with a broken pencil…… ……………………………………cause like you, its pointless Narutal Killa: ok yours sounded like it was half assed... it doesnt even sounded like your rap. sounds like your talking with rhymes. no real hard punches there though i liked the 2 last bar.. it was pretty decent... overall no hard personals you couldve reworded the second bar to a better personal. the opener was all right. no multis which gave you bad flow Spek: you came hard as usual you had punches that hit directly and nice personals that were straightforward te opener could ve ben reworded. but the closer punch was a 10/10 that wasw one of the best punches iv'e heard from you. Nice wordplay and the flow was better. V/ Spek singlehandedly
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12-30-05, 02:42 AM | #96 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
lol Paramik.
Sup dawg, when are we gunna have our rematch??? upping........ |
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12-31-05, 12:34 AM | #97 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Upping to finish this god forsaken battle thread....
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12-31-05, 10:59 AM | #98 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: F940 2708
uppin.............................................
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12-31-05, 11:55 PM | #99 | |
Put Yo Money On Me
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
IP: 1641 ADD1
I wasnt feeling none of the verses, so I wont vote. I'll just up feedback. Tha creativity in both verses was there, but I think you guys were kinda pushing it to come out too much. I like how you wanted to come up with new lines, thats good and all, but they hafto make since at the same time. I think what both of ya'll did was focus too much on creative writing. Another thing I saw was soft disses. Dissing each other wasn't all that. I felt ya'll could've came a lil bit harder. Some of the lines should've been left out. Structure was easy to read in both verses. Usually I judge on delivery. Who delivered there verse better by staying more consistent, and I didn't see any of that. I think both of you have skill, you just rushed through these verses. Focus more on harder disses and better wordplay, and you probably will elevate more.
Good verses though. -Take all critism and use it to better yourself. -Eazy
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01-03-06, 03:15 AM | #100 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Upping like a dumping...............................
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01-03-06, 04:14 PM | #101 | |
in your system
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
IP: 9E2F CDE8
slovakia de la polls .
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01-05-06, 08:17 AM | #102 | |
Black Poet
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
IP: 2041 AFC0
Spek won this battle his verse was nice, the opener
killed it... Emcee? Kid used to be a tap dancer, till he fell in the sink Shit, in his sig he cant even provide us with a proper battle link ^Good use of wordplay, nice punch good flow^ best punch: Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age? ^Nice personal, good flow hard hitting punch. Killa, come nice to, I kept losing your flow at times it wasnt as fluid at Speks.. but u still come pretty nice.. Best punch: Making all them excuses..but you could never meddle with dope,still, cuz u don't half-ass SHIT,bitch..that's just the level of ya' skill ^Nice punch good flow^ Spek won this battle, he had better flow, more personals dope wordplay and an all round better verse. Stay up both Vote ~ Spek Can't vote need 2000 post how rubbish is that, oh well not my loss!!! 1~ |
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01-06-06, 01:17 PM | #103 | |
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Upping.......................................
Finish this thing already. |
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01-06-06, 09:10 PM | #104 | |
Moderator
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IP: 51A3 84F9
Voted For: Natural killa
Natural Killa Making all them excuses..but you could never meddle with dope,still, cuz u don't half-ass SHIT,bitch..that's just the level of ya' skill Lmao. I thought this was dope. Your brain musta spilled,sayin no explanations?..well,it must be weed 'n shit, cuz spek...Even if I drop the alphabet......you would still need that,bitch Nah.. And I seen ya' last battle,a win..against appoc..nice job,hold it true, But then again,it's a little too bad..that only newbs and herbs vote for you Decent.. I'll Demote ya' too..cuz your wack 'n try to hide it,I'll bruise ur kind, cuz your the 1st dude to be undefeated in record.......but lose 7 times Dope.. because it's true.. Spektikul Emcee? Kid used to be a tap dancer, till he fell in the sink Shit, in his sig he cant even provide us with a proper battle link (vs nick) No punch.. doesn't really relate to a battle.. Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age? Nameplays on Natural Killa are played out.. Ill kick your nuts & rob too, gimmie all the cashew got on you You say your reppin Trinidad, shit, Ill just drop an fuckin bomb you Not a punch.. Ill admit that on this site, you deal with lots of different choices I chose to write this battle with a broken pencil…… ……………………………………cause like you, its pointless Played wordplay.. Man, this was a different turnout then what I expected opening this thread. I thought Natural Killa was going to get smashed on, but it turns out that he did win this battle. His opener was dope, as was his closer. He had some average shit in the middle, but none of them were just like, horribly wack. Spektikul came with quite a bit of played shit. The nameplay, pointless lines. Some of the other shit didn't have punches. Like, saying your bombing Trinidad isn't a punch. Saying that links don't work in sigs isn't a punch. So, basing off of my breakdown of the verses, I have to give this battle to Natural Killa. Word. |
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01-06-06, 09:12 PM | #105 | |
Moderator
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IP: 51A3 84F9
Wow. These results are kind of disappointing to see. I don't have beef with either one of these guys, and when I opened this thread I thought Spektikul would win, but he didn't even come close to taking this battle. Whatever.
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